自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., "No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child."). Give one brief reason or detail using correct tense and linking words (e.g., "because my family couldn't afford one" or "because I lived in a small apartment"). Keep it to 1–3 sentences and avoid unclear words like "scale."

範例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn't afford one. As a result, I usually walked to school or used public transport.

建議: Give a clear opinion first, then support it with specific, organized details and appropriate linking words. Use correct grammar (present simple for facts). Avoid vague or unfinished sentences. Mention who rides bikes and why (e.g., for transport, exercise, or leisure). Limit to 2–3 concise sentences.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Many people of all ages use bicycles for commuting and exercise, and in my family even my grandparents enjoy cycling for leisure and health.

× Actually, I don't have scale to ride the bike, so I didn't have a bike when I'm young.

✓ Actually, I didn't have a bicycle to ride when I was young.

The sentence has multiple issues matched to the quantifier category: 'have scale' is incorrect — likely meant 'a bicycle' (article and noun choice). Also tense consistency: the speaker refers to past, so use past tense 'didn't have' and 'when I was young.' Replace 'bike' with 'a bicycle' for clarity and include the article 'a.' Suggestion: use 'I didn't have a bicycle to ride when I was young.'

× I will definitely say yes because in my country from children to other there are a lot of people ride bike on the road.

✓ I would definitely say yes because in my country many people, from children to adults, ride bicycles on the road.

The original mixes future 'I will' with a general present habit; 'would' or 'I definitely say yes' is better but matched here to present tense issue: general truths use simple present ('ride'). Also incorrect phrase 'from children to other' should be 'from children to adults.' Use plural 'bicycles' or 'bikes' and include a comma for the list. Suggestion: 'I would definitely say yes because in my country many people, from children to adults, ride bicycles on the road.'

× All my family even my grandpa, grandma love this sport.

✓ My whole family, even my grandpa and grandma, love this sport.

The phrase 'All my family' is informal; 'my whole family' or 'all of my family' is preferred. Also missing 'and' between 'grandpa' and 'grandma.' Commas set off the parenthetical phrase. Suggestion: 'My whole family, even my grandpa and grandma, love this sport.'

× It can make us.

✓ It can bring us together.

'It can make us' is incomplete and unclear; this is a sentence structure problem. What does 'make us' mean? Likely intended 'bring us together' or 'keep us healthy.' Provide a clear object and complement. Suggestion: replace with 'It can bring us together' or 'It can keep us healthy' depending on intended meaning.