自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Bạn đã lặp lại câu hỏi của giám khảo thay vì trả lời. Cần trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề, sau đó thêm 1–2 chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể (ví dụ thời gian, ai cho, hoặc kỷ niệm liên quan). Giữ tổng câu trả lời không quá 5 câu và dùng từ nối khi thêm chi tiết.

範例: Yes, I had a red bicycle when I was about seven. My parents bought it for my birthday, and I learned to ride it in the park near our house. I remember practicing every afternoon, and soon I could ride without help.

建議: Bạn lại lặp câu hỏi thay vì đưa ra ý kiến. Cần đưa ra câu chủ đề nêu quan điểm rõ ràng, sau đó giải thích với các lý do hoặc ví dụ cụ thể (ví dụ so sánh thành phố/nông thôn, mục đích sử dụng như đi làm hay giải trí). Sử dụng từ nối để liên kết các ý.

範例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller towns. Many people use them for short journeys because they are cheap and convenient. However, in big cities cars and motorcycles are more common due to traffic and longer distances.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The original student response simply repeated the examiner's question and did not provide an answer. This is a sentence structure/communication error: a question requires an answer. Suggestion: respond with a complete past-tense sentence using 'had' for possession (past tense). Example: 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.'

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The original student response repeated the examiner's question rather than answering. Use present simple to express general opinion: 'I think' + clause. Suggestion: give a full sentence expressing opinion, e.g. 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.'