自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Give a direct, past-focused answer using correct tense and a clear topic sentence. Briefly add one or two specific details (reason or consequence). Use simple linking words and correct grammar (e.g., "I didn't have" not "I haven't had"). Keep it under 3 sentences.

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. As a result, I never learned to cycle properly, because my family lived in a busy city where it wasn’t safe to ride.

建議: Answer directly and clearly with accurate facts or a clear estimate. Use linking words for clarity and correct phrasing (e.g., "I think bikes are popular in my country"). Avoid vague numbers and repetitions; if giving statistics, state them clearly. Keep it to 2–3 concise sentences.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many young people use bicycles for commuting to work or university, and in my community roughly 30–40% of people my age cycle regularly.

× I haven't had a bike when I was a child and I haven't had the chance to learn how to bike.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child, and I didn't have the chance to learn how to ride a bike.

The sentence mixes present perfect ('haven't had') with a past time expression ('when I was a child'), which is incorrect. Use past simple ('didn't have') for completed past situations. Also 'learn how to bike' is awkward; use 'learn how to ride a bike' or 'learn to ride a bike.' Replace the second 'haven't had' with 'didn't have' for parallel past tense. Suggestion: use past simple for past time references and use the verb phrase 'ride a bike.'

× Yes, I think bikes are really popular in your country as one, as one of my my observations, almost half or seven of a percent of the population in our community with the same age of mine are using our Yeah.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are really popular in my country. From my observations, almost half of the people in my age group in our community use them.

Multiple issues: the speaker incorrectly said 'your country' instead of 'my country' when speaking about their own country (incorrect pronoun/possessive), repeated 'as one, as one' and duplicated 'my' (word repetition), and used a confusing and incorrect quantifier phrase 'seven of a percent.' Also 'with the same age of mine' is ungrammatical; use 'in my age group' or 'people my age.' The verb phrase 'are using our Yeah' is incomplete and unclear; use 'use them' referring to bikes. Corrections: change 'your' to 'my' for correct reference, remove repetitions, use 'From my observations' to introduce an observation, use 'almost half' (not 'almost half or seven of a percent'), and 'people in my age group use them.'