自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise, grammatically correct and use past tense consistently. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two brief supporting details. Avoid repetition and filler words. For example, say you had a bike but couldn't ride yet, explain why or when you learned, and use linking words like "but" or "until".

範例: Yes, I had a bike as a child, but I couldn’t ride it at first. I was afraid of balancing, so I practiced with my parents’ help until I learned to ride when I was seven.

建議: Answer directly, use full sentences and correct grammar, and avoid hesitation words. Provide a specific reason and a short example. Use linking words like "because" or "for example" to connect idea and detail. Correct common errors: say "bikes are popular," "there are bike lanes," and give a concrete example of when or where you see many cyclists.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many cities have dedicated bike lanes. For example, I often see large numbers of commuters cycling to work along the riverside bike paths during rush hour.

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The question asks about having a bike when you were a child (past time). The student used present tense 'have' instead of past tense 'had'. Use past tense to match the time frame: 'had'. Suggestion: Replace present tense verbs with past tense when referring to past situations.

× When I I was a child, however, I couldn't ride a bike.

✓ When I was a child, however, I couldn't ride a bike.

This sentence has a repetition 'I I' (typo) but grammatically the tense is correct (past). The issue is a typing error rather than a tense error. Remove the duplicated word. Suggestion: Proofread to eliminate duplicated words.

× Yes, I think uh, the bike very popular in my country because in in the city have the in the city there are roads for bike.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because in the city there are roads for bicycles.

Multiple errors: plural/singular and verb agreement, article misuse, word order, and redundancy. 'The bike very popular' lacks auxiliary verb and should use plural 'bikes' with verb 'are' (subject-verb agreement). 'in in' is duplicated; 'have the in the city' is ungrammatical—use 'there are' for existence. 'roads for bike' should be 'roads for bicycles' or 'bike lanes'. Suggestions: Use plural form 'bikes' when speaking generally, include the correct verb 'are', remove duplicate words, and use 'there are' to indicate existence: 'there are roads for bicycles'.