自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct tense and verb forms, avoid filler words, and give one or two brief supporting details. Keep it within 1–3 sentences.

範例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I only got my first bicycle while I was studying for my bachelor's degree, so I mostly walked or used public transport before then.

建議: Begin with a clear direct answer, then give 2 specific reasons using linking words. Fix grammar (e.g. 'cars' not 'cards'), avoid repetition and filler sounds, and use concise vocabulary (e.g. 'fuel-efficient' or 'cheaper'). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because roads are congested and two-wheelers are easier to maneuver. Also, bikes are more fuel-efficient and cheaper to maintain, so many people choose them for daily commuting.

× No, I didn't have, I didn't had bike.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike.

The sentence uses the past tense negative 'didn't' which requires the base form of the verb 'have', not the past form 'had'. Also the indefinite article 'a' is needed before 'bike'. Suggestion: Use 'didn't' + base verb (didn't have) and include appropriate articles (a/an) where needed.

× I got my first goatee and I was studying uh in my bachelor degree.

✓ I got my first bike and I was studying for my bachelor's degree.

'Goatee' is likely a wrong word here; 'bike' fits the context. Use 'studying for my bachelor's degree' to express studying towards a degree; 'bachelor's degree' requires the possessive form and article. Also 'for' is the correct preposition with 'studying'. The structure 'was studying' (past continuous) is fine if describing an ongoing past action.

× Yes, they are quite popular here because uh here we have a lot of population and everybody uses uh uses cards or any other 4 four Wheeler uh, it'll be difficult on the road.

✓ Yes, they are quite popular here because we have a large population and if everybody uses cars or other four-wheelers, it would be difficult on the roads.

Problems: 'a lot of population' is unidiomatic; use 'a large population' or 'a lot of people'. 'Cards' is a misspelling of 'cars'. '4 four Wheeler' is redundant and should be 'four-wheelers' or 'four-wheel vehicles'. 'It'll be difficult on the road' is vague; use conditional 'if... it would be difficult on the roads' to explain consequence. Also plural 'roads' fits general statement.

× So everybody here prefers bike and also uh to save the fuel as well.

✓ So everybody here prefers bikes and also to save fuel.

Use plural 'bikes' for general preference (or 'a bike' if singular reference). 'Prefer' takes a noun; include plural for generalization. 'The fuel' is unnecessary; use 'fuel' without the definite article. 'As well' is redundant with 'also'; choose one. Suggestion: 'prefers bikes and also to save fuel' or better 'prefers bikes to save fuel.'