自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your response is unclear and does not answer the question. Speak directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and keep length under five sentences. Use one or two specific supporting details (e.g., who gave it to you, how you used it) and simple linking words like “and” or “because.” Also correct basic grammar: say “Did you have a bike when you were a child?” only once and then answer (e.g., “Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.”).

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle that my parents bought me for my sixth birthday, and I rode it every day to visit my friends. Because I practiced a lot, I became very confident riding on busy streets.

建議: Your answer tries to give an opinion but is grammatically incorrect and vague. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., “Bikes are somewhat popular in my country.”), then add one or two specific reasons linked with simple connectors: “because,” “but,” or “however.” Avoid filler words and incorrect vocabulary (e.g., “portfolio” is wrong here). Keep to no more than five sentences and give a concrete example or statistic if possible.

範例: Bikes are somewhat popular in my country, but they are not as common as cars. This is because many people cannot afford good bicycles or the roads are not safe for riding. For example, in my city only a few streets have bike lanes, so most families prefer to use motorbikes or cars.

× Did you have a time when you were chapter? Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The first sentence contains word choice and word order errors: 'time' and 'chapter' are incorrect in this context. The intended meaning is the second sentence, a simple past question about possession in childhood. Remove the incorrect first sentence and keep the correct one: 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' Use the simple past 'Did you have' for asking about past possession and keep 'when you were a child' as the time clause. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× They are sort of popular, but not portfolio has people cannot afford, uh, bikes in here.

✓ They are sort of popular, but many people here cannot afford bikes.

The original sentence has multiple problems: incorrect words ('portfolio', 'has') and wrong word order. The intended meaning is that bikes are somewhat popular but many people cannot afford them. Use 'many people here cannot afford bikes' for correct subject and verb order. 'Here' follows 'people' to indicate location; 'cannot afford bikes' correctly expresses inability. This fixes incorrect pronoun/word use and restores clear sentence structure. Grammar problem type ID: 12