自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise, use correct tense, reduce hesitations and give a clear structure: topic sentence + supporting detail. Correct past tense (I had), remove filler words (uh), and simplify the birthday phrase (on my tenth birthday). Aim for 2–3 sentences and include a linking phrase for clarity.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a gift from my father on my tenth birthday, and I rode it to school and around the neighborhood every day.

建議: Answer directly to the examiner's question and avoid asking the examiner to repeat or clarify unless you genuinely did not understand. Provide a topic sentence stating your opinion, then add one or two specific supporting reasons using linking words (for example, because, so, therefore).

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, cities have bike lanes and many students cycle to school, which makes cycling both convenient and common.

× Uh, I will say yes, I have a bike when I was a child and this bike, uh, is a gift that my father, uh, sent me in my birthday of 10 years old.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and this bike was a gift my father gave me for my 10th birthday.

The student used 'I will say' which incorrectly places response in the future; use simple past to match 'when you were a child.' 'I have a bike when I was a child' mixes present and past—change 'have' to past 'had.' 'Is a gift' should be 'was a gift' to maintain past tense. 'Sent me in my birthday of 10 years old' is unidiomatic: use 'gave me for my 10th birthday.' Suggestions: keep consistent past tense for events in childhood, use 'had' for possession in past, and use 'gave me for my 10th birthday' for the action and occasion.

× In your country?

✓ Do you mean in my country?

The student replied with a fragment 'In your country?' which is unclear and does not form a complete response. The examiner asked 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' The student likely intended to confirm the meaning; a complete clarifying question is 'Do you mean in my country?' or answer directly. Suggestion: respond with a full sentence or a clear question rather than a fragment.