自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 응답이 현재형과 과거형 혼용되어 있고 내용이 매우 짧아 점수가 낮습니다. 질문은 과거 경험을 묻고 있으므로 과거 시제를 사용하고, 토픽 문장(간단한 대답) 다음에 이유나 기억, 빈도 등 구체적인 세부사항을 한두 문장으로 덧붙이세요. 연결어(for example, when, because)를 사용해 문장을 자연스럽게 이어주면 좋습니다.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used it almost every day to ride to my friend’s house, and I especially remember racing down the hill near our school because it felt thrilling.

建議: 답변이 단어 하나로 끝나 매우 불충분합니다. 질문에 직접적으로 의견을 제시하는 토픽 문장을 먼저 말하고, 그 의견을 지지하는 구체적인 이유나 예시를 1–2문장으로 덧붙이세요. 또한 연결어(However, because, for example, nowadays)를 사용해 논리를 명확히 하세요.

範例: I think bikes are becoming more popular in my country. For example, many people use bicycles for short trips in cities because bike lanes have improved and it's cheaper than driving.

× 'Yes, I have.'

✓ 'Yes, I did.'

'Question asks about a past situation (Did you have a bike when you were a child?). The student used present perfect form "I have," which is inappropriate for a simple past question. Use simple past "I did" or a full answer "Yes, I had a bike". Suggestion: answer past tense questions with past tense verbs (e.g., "Yes, I had" or "Yes, I did").'

× 'Actually.'

✓ 'Actually, yes. Bikes are quite popular in my country.'

'"Actually" alone is a sentence fragment and does not answer the examiner's question about whether bikes are popular. This is a sentence structure error (missing verb and full idea). Provide a complete sentence that addresses the question, e.g., "Actually, yes. Bikes are quite popular in my country." Suggestion: expand sentence to include a subject and verb and give a clear opinion.'