自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your response simply repeated the examiner’s question instead of answering. To improve, give a clear direct answer (topic sentence), then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it natural and under five sentences. Also correct grammar and vocabulary (e.g., 'bike' not 'bite').

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I rode it to my friend’s house most afternoons. Because my neighborhood was quiet and safe, my parents felt comfortable letting me ride alone.

建議: Your answer gives a direct opinion but has grammatical errors, awkward phrasing, and some repetition. Improve by using a clear topic sentence, correcting grammar (singular/plural, tense), and adding one specific reason or example linked with connectors like 'because' or 'for example.' Keep it concise (max five sentences).

範例: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, when I was a child almost every family owned at least one bike and children often rode to school or to friends’ houses.

× Yes, it's very popular in my country and in and when I was a child almost all the children around me have their own bites.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, and when I was a child almost all the children around me had their own bikes.

This sentence has multiple grammar issues that match the 'Third person singular issue' and 'Past tense issue' categories. The clause 'it's very popular' incorrectly uses 'it's' to refer to 'bikes' (plural); use 'bikes are' to agree in number (subject-verb agreement). The clause 'almost all the children around me have their own bites' uses present tense 'have' but refers to a past time frame ('when I was a child'), so it should be past tense 'had'. Also 'bites' is a misspelling of 'bikes'. Suggestions: ensure subject and verb agree in number (use 'are' with plural 'bikes'), match tense to the time expression (use past tense for past time), and correct spelling errors ('bikes').