自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains wrong vocabulary (’bag’ instead of ‘bike’). It is also ungrammatical (mixing present tense with past). Give a direct topic sentence stating whether you had a bike, then add one or two specific supporting details (when you got it, how you used it, a brief memory). Keep it to no more than 3–4 short sentences and use past tense. Use linking words like “and” or “so” if you add details.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I received it as a birthday present when I was eight, and I rode it to school and around the neighborhood every day. It helped me make friends because we often rode together after classes.

建議: Your answer is non-verbal and gives no information. Provide a clear opinion (yes/no/partly) and support it with specific reasons or examples. Use linking words such as “because,” “for example,” or “however” to make your response coherent. Keep it brief (2–3 sentences).

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in cities there are bike lanes and shared bikes, so commuting by bicycle is convenient for students and office workers.

× Yes, I have a bag in my childhood.

✓ Yes, I had a bike in my childhood.

The question asks about possession in the past ('Did you have a bike when you were a child?'), so the past simple tense is required. The student used present perfect 'have' which is incorrect for a finished past time ('in my childhood'). Also the noun 'bag' does not match the question about a 'bike' — likely a word choice error. Use past simple 'had' to match the past time reference and correct the noun to 'bike'. Suggestion: use 'I had' + noun when referring to possession in a finished past period (e.g., 'I had a bike when I was a child').