自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm; trả lời trực tiếp với câu chủ đề rõ ràng; cung cấp thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết hỗ trợ (khoảng thời gian, lý do thích, ai tặng); sử dụng liên từ để mạch lạc. Ví dụ: dùng thì quá khứ (I had), tránh từ sai (bike vs pie), không lặp âm tiết như "umm" quá nhiều.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used it almost every day to ride to my friend’s house and to practice cycling in the park. It was a small red bike that my parents gave me for my seventh birthday, so I was very attached to it.

建議: Trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và ngắt câu không tự nhiên; cung cấp lý do và ví dụ cụ thể; dùng liên từ để kết nối ý (because, however, for example). Nên mở rộng thành 2–3 câu hỗ trợ quan điểm.

範例: Not really — I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country because many people prefer cars and public transport. For example, in big cities cycling can be dangerous due to heavy traffic and a lack of bike lanes.

× Umm yes, I have a pie when I was a child.

✓ Umm yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

Student used 'have' (present) with 'when I was a child' (past) and also wrote 'pie' instead of 'bike' (wrong word). Use past tense 'had' for past situations and correct the noun to 'bike'. Suggestion: use past simple for past habits (e.g., 'I had a bike when I was a child').

× No, Oh my country. No. No. Popular.

✓ No, bikes are not very popular in my country.

Response is fragmented and lacks a clear subject and verb. The question asks about popularity of bikes, so provide a complete sentence with subject 'bikes' and verb 'are' and an adjective phrase 'not very popular' to express the idea. Suggestion: answer in a full sentence such as 'No, bikes are not very popular in my country.'