自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời đã trả lời trực tiếp nhưng có vài lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ không cần thiết. Hãy sửa thì động từ không phù hợp (ví dụ “I have” không cần thiết khi nói về quá khứ), nối các ý với từ liên kết để mạch lạc hơn, và thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ màu sắc, thói quen sử dụng) trong tối đa 4-5 câu để tự nhiên hơn.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a red bicycle in primary school that my father gave me as a present. I used it every day to ride to school, and sometimes I helped my mother by cycling to the market with small groceries. Because it was practical and meaningful, I loved riding it.

建議: Câu trả lời nêu quan điểm rõ nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp (chủ-động từ, số ít/số nhiều), phát âm do ngập ngừng và câu cuối mâu thuẫn (nói 'especially old lady they won't go to market by bike' gây nhầm). Hãy dùng cấu trúc rõ ràng, tránh ngập ngừng, sửa lỗi số nhiều/số ít, và cung cấp một ví dụ hoặc so sánh cụ thể để câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Many students use bicycles to commute to school, and some manual workers find them convenient for short trips. However, older people often prefer walking or using public transport for longer journeys, so usage varies by age and purpose.

× I have.

✓ I did.

The student used 'I have' (present perfect) alone which is incorrect here. The examiner's question refers to a past situation ('when you were a child'), so the correct short answer is 'I did' or a past simple full sentence. Suggestion: use past simple for completed past events (e.g. 'Yes, I did' or 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child').

× I had a bike when I was in primary school.

✓ I had a bike when I was in primary school.

Sentence is already correct past tense and matches the question, no change needed. Keep using past simple for past habitual/specific events.

× It was my father's gift and I used it to go to school to help my mother to go to market.

✓ It was my father's gift and I used it to go to school and to help my mother go to the market.

Problems: repetition of 'to' and missing definite article before 'market'. Use parallel infinitive structure 'to go to school and to help' or combine with 'and' then base verb 'go'. Also use the definite article 'the market' for a specific place. Suggestion: simplify structure and add 'the' before 'market'.

× So I loved it very much.

✓ So I loved it very much.

This sentence is grammatically correct; adverb placement 'very much' after the verb is acceptable. No change needed.

× Yes, of course bikes is very popular in my country because people use it to go to school and some workers here, they use it to go to uh work and especially old lady they won't go to market by bike.

✓ Yes, of course bicycles are very popular in my country because people use them to go to school, and some workers use them to go to work. Especially older women don't go to the market by bike.

Multiple errors: 'bikes is' should be plural subject with plural verb 'bicycles are' (subject-verb agreement). Pronouns must agree: 'people use them' not 'it'. Repetition and unnecessary pronouns removed ('some workers here, they use it' → 'some workers use them'). 'old lady' should be plural and age adjective corrected to 'older women'. Use negative contraction 'don't' for present general statement and include definite article 'the market'. Suggestions: ensure subject and verb agree, match pronouns to plural nouns, use correct noun forms and articles, and break long sentence into clearer parts.