自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammatical accuracy and fluency: use correct past tense and concise phrasing. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one supporting detail. Use linking words if needed. For example, say: “No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn’t afford one.” If you want to add a bit more, add a brief consequence: “As a result, I usually walked to school or used public transport.” Avoid filler words like “well.”

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn’t afford one. As a result, I usually walked to school or took public buses, which helped me become independent.

建議: Work on clarity, grammar and coherence. Begin with a direct opinion, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words (for example, "because" or "so"). Correct vocabulary and sentence structure: e.g. use plural/singular consistently and avoid repetition. A concise, linked response could be: “No, bikes aren’t very popular in my country because road conditions are poor and they aren’t practical for long-distance transport of goods.” Optionally add a brief example or consequence.

範例: No, bikes aren’t very popular in my country because many roads are in poor condition, which makes cycling unsafe. Also, they aren’t practical for carrying goods over long distances, so most people prefer motorbikes or cars.

× I don't have a bike when I was a child because my parents were not wealthy. Well.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents were not wealthy.

The sentence mixes present tense 'don't have' with a past time reference 'when I was a child'. Use past tense 'didn't have' to match the past timeframe. Suggestion: use past simple for actions/states that occurred in the past (I didn't have, I was).

× Bikes are not that popular in my country due to bad road and I I think bike is not really suitable for transportation of goods from one state to another, so bites another popular in my country.

✓ Bikes are not that popular in my country due to bad roads, and I think bikes are not really suitable for transporting goods from one state to another, so bikes are not very popular in my country.

Multiple tense and number issues: 'bad road' should be plural 'bad roads' (count noun), and 'I I' is a duplication. 'bike is not really suitable for transportation' mixes singular with general meaning; use plural 'bikes are' or use 'a bike is...'. Also 'transportation of goods' is better as 'transporting goods'. The final clause 'so bites another popular' appears to be a typo; corrected to 'so bikes are not very popular'. Suggestions: match subject number and verb ('bikes are'), pluralize count nouns when generalizing ('roads'), and use gerund 'transporting' after 'suitable for'.