自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your response simply repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. To improve, answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it natural and concise (no more than 5 sentences).

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, which my parents bought for me when I was six. As a result, I learned to ride quickly and used it every day to visit friends and ride to the park.

建議: Again, you repeated the question instead of giving an answer. Give a clear opinion first, then support it with specific reasons or examples and linking words (for example, because, therefore, however). Stay within five sentences and use natural vocabulary.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are fairly popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For instance, in cities there are bike lanes and shared-bike services, so commuters often choose cycling to avoid traffic. However, car ownership is still common in rural areas, so popularity varies by location.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student's response merely repeated the examiner's question, which is a sentence structure/communication error rather than a grammatical form error. The appropriate answer should be a declarative sentence in the past tense to match the question (Did you...?). Use the simple past 'had' for a completed action in the past. Suggestion: answer directly with 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.' or 'No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.' depending on the intended meaning.

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of giving a proper answer. The question uses the present simple 'Do you think...', so the response should be in the present simple as well. Use 'I think' followed by the clause 'bikes are popular in my country.' Suggestion: respond directly, e.g. 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.' or 'No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country.'