自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammatical accuracy and sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms (use past tense), remove redundancy, and keep to a maximum of about 3–4 sentences. For example, say you often rode with parents, where you went, and one memory or feeling to enrich the answer.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it with my parents every weekend, usually to the park or to attend mass at our local church. I remember feeling free and excited as we cycled together along quiet streets.

建議: Clarify and organize reasons with clearer vocabulary and linking words. Begin with a direct opinion, then give two specific supporting reasons (infrastructure and observed use), using correct nouns (bike lanes/paths, streets) and concise phrasing. Avoid repeating words and keep sentences coherent.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country. Firstly, many cities now have dedicated bike lanes and parking areas, which makes cycling convenient. Secondly, I often see large numbers of cyclists near the city centre at weekends, especially on sunny days.

× Yes I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

The question asks about possession in the past ('Did you have a bike when you were a child?'), so the student should use the past tense. 'Have' is present tense; 'did' is the correct past-tense short answer to a yes/no question. Also add a comma after 'Yes' for natural punctuation.

× When I was a child every weekend I go I went with my parents, the park, with a bike or for a mass in the church.

✓ When I was a child, every weekend I went to the park with my parents on a bike or to Mass at the church.

This sentence has multiple structural and tense errors. The correct tense is past ('went') to match 'When I was a child.' Remove the extra 'go' and reorder phrases for clarity: place time expressions ('When I was a child, every weekend') at the beginning or near the verb, use 'went to the park' not 'the park' alone, and say 'to Mass' and 'at the church.' Use commas to separate introductory time phrases. Suggestions: keep a single past tense verb, place location phrases after the verb, and use idiomatic prepositions ('to the park', 'to Mass', 'at the church').

× I would say yes because we have a lot of ride for the bike, a lot of St. for the bike and also in the weekend I can see a lot of bike near the center or in the city I know.

✓ I would say yes because we have a lot of bike lanes, many places to ride, and also on weekends I can see many bikes near the city center.

The original uses incorrect nouns and quantifiers: 'a lot of ride for the bike' and 'a lot of St. for the bike' are ungrammatical. Use 'a lot of bike lanes' or 'many places to ride.' Use 'many bikes' not 'a lot of bike.' Use the plural 'weekends' with the preposition 'on' ('on weekends'). Also change word order for natural English: 'near the city center' is idiomatic. Suggestions: choose correct countable/uncountable noun forms (use 'many' with countable plural nouns, 'a lot of' can work but must modify appropriate noun), use 'on weekends,' and use common collocations like 'bike lanes' and 'city center.'