自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan waktu (tenses), singkatkan jawaban agar lebih natural, dan tambahkan detail konkret dengan kata hubung untuk koherensi. Misalnya, gunakan past tense konsisten, hindari pengulangan kata seperti 'love', dan tambahkan detail seperti lokasi atau aktivitas spesifik.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike when I was about eight, and I often rode it with my friends to the park near our houses. We would race each other and practice wheelies, which made those afternoons really fun.

建議: Perbaiki struktur kalimat dan pengucapan kata yang tidak jelas, gunakan linking words untuk menunjukkan perubahan waktu, dan tambahkan contoh spesifik untuk memperkuat pendapat (mis. acara sepeda, jalur sepeda).

範例: Yes, I believe so. Over the past five years cycling has become much more popular, and now it's common to see groups of people riding every morning. For example, many cities have introduced bike lanes and weekend cycling events, which encourage more people to take up cycling.

× Yes I did. I have a bike when I was a child and I love to play with my friends so I love to go near my house with them, so it was fun.

✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child and I loved to play with my friends, so I enjoyed going near my house with them; it was fun.

The speaker mixes past and present tense verbs. Use past tense for completed actions in childhood: 'had' instead of 'have' and 'loved' instead of 'love'. Also change 'I love to go near my house with them' to 'I enjoyed going near my house with them' for tense consistency and smoother phrasing. Suggestion: keep all verbs referring to past events in the past tense and use commas or conjunctions to connect clauses clearly.

× I think for the past five years by bike has, uh, has become a hobby for many people in my country, so it's easy now to find people who ride a bike every morning.

✓ I think over the past five years, biking has become a hobby for many people in my country, so it's easy now to find people who ride bikes every morning.

Several issues: 'for the past five years' is better as 'over the past five years' to indicate a period continuing to now. 'by bike has, uh, has become' is ungrammatical; use 'biking has become' or 'riding bikes has become'. Also use plural 'bikes' after 'ride' when speaking generally. Suggestion: say 'over the past five years, biking has become a hobby' and avoid filler sounds in spoken answers.