自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Give a complete, natural response. Start with a topic sentence saying whether you had a bike, then add one or two specific supporting details (when you got it, how often you used it, who taught you). Keep it concise (no more than 4–5 sentences) and use linking words like “and” or “because.”

範例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about seven, and I used it almost every day to visit my friends and explore the neighborhood. My father taught me to ride, and I remember feeling very proud the first time I rode without training wheels.

建議: Answer directly and clearly. Decide whether you think bikes are popular and give specific reasons or examples using correct grammar and linking words (for example, “because,” “however,” or “for example”). Avoid contradictions in one sentence. Use singular/plural correctly and choose clear vocabulary like “cyclists” or “bicycles.” Keep to 2–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in cities there are bike lanes and shared bicycle schemes, and many students ride to school to save money on transport.

× Yes, I don't think so.

✓ Yes.

The student replies 'Yes, I don't think so.' which is contradictory and uses a negation incorrectly; the question 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' expects a simple affirmative or negative. This sentence mistakenly combines 'Yes' with 'I don't think so' (a negative opinion) causing confusion. Suggestion: choose one clear response. For affirmation use 'Yes.' For negation use 'No, I don't think so.' Ensure pronouns and negation do not contradict the intended meaning.

× Another day the biker are very popular in accommodation.

✓ Nowadays bikers are very common in urban areas.

The original sentence has multiple problems: 'Another day' is incorrect for 'nowadays' (time expression), 'the biker' uses singular with plural meaning and incorrect article, and 'are' is plural but follows 'the biker' which is singular — causing subject-number confusion. 'in accommodation' is an incorrect prepositional phrase for where bikers are seen. Correction uses 'Nowadays' (correct time phrase), plural noun 'bikers' with plural verb 'are', and 'in urban areas' as a natural location. Suggestion: use 'nowadays' for present trends, match noun number with verb, and choose appropriate location phrases like 'in cities' or 'urban areas.'