自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Clarify the main idea and correct grammar. Begin with a clear topic sentence answering the question (e.g. “Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.”). Then give one or two specific supporting details (who gave it, how you used it), using correct verb forms and linking words. Keep answers concise (no more than 4–5 short sentences). Fix common errors: use ‘bought me’ not ‘bought it to me’, and ‘I used it to go to school’ not ‘I used to buy to school’.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mother bought it for me as a birthday present, and I used it to ride to school every day. Because it was light and reliable, I felt independent and enjoyed biking with my friends after class.

× Yes, I had a bag when I was a child because of my mom bought it to me.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child because my mom bought it for me.

Pronoun and word choice errors: 'bag' should be 'bike' to answer the examiner's question; 'because of my mom bought it to me' is ungrammatical. Use 'because' + clause ('because my mom bought it for me') or 'because of' + noun phrase ('because of my mom'). Also use the correct preposition 'for' with 'bought' when indicating recipient. Suggestion: Use 'because my mom bought it for me' or 'because of my mom' followed by a noun phrase. Grammar problem type ID:12

× I used to buy to school.

✓ I used to ride it to school.

Wrong verb and preposition: 'buy to school' is incorrect. For a bicycle, the appropriate verb is 'ride' and the preposition is 'to' for destination. 'Used to' requires the base verb form, so 'used to ride'. Suggestion: Say 'I used to ride it to school' to mean habitual past action. Grammar problem type ID:11