自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 답변이 지나치게 짧고 구체성이 없습니다. 질문에 직접 답한 뒤에는 이유나 상황, 구체적인 예시를 덧붙여야 합니다. 또한 연결어를 사용해 문장을 자연스럽게 확장하세요. 예: 언제, 어떤 종류의 자전거였는지, 누구와 탔는지, 기억에 남는 에피소드 등을 2~3문장으로 덧붙이세요.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a red bicycle with a basket when I was about eight years old, and I used to ride it to my friend’s house every afternoon. Because the roads near our home were quiet, I felt very free and rode it almost every day.

建議: 대답이 너무 간단합니다. 의견을 묻는 질문에는 간단한 주장 뒤에 이유와 구체적인 예를 제시해야 합니다. 연결어(For example, Because, Also)를 사용하여 근거와 사례를 덧붙이세요. 인구 통계, 도시/농촌 차이, 자전거 이용 목적(출퇴근, 레저) 등을 언급하면 좋습니다.

範例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. For example, many people use bikes for short commutes because traffic is heavy and bike lanes have become more common, while others ride them for exercise or weekend recreation.

× Yeah.

✓ Yes, I did.

The student response 'Yeah' is informal and lacks the auxiliary verb needed to answer a past simple yes/no question. The question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' requires a short answer using the auxiliary 'did' plus the subject 'I' (Yes, I did.). Suggestion: Use 'Yes, I did.' for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yeah.

✓ Yes, they are popular in my country.

The question 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' is in the present simple. The response 'Yeah' is informal and does not provide a full sentence matching the tense. A grammatically complete answer is 'Yes, they are popular in my country.' Suggestion: Use a full present simple sentence with subject and verb (e.g., 'Yes, they are popular in my country.').