自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant but unclear and grammatically incorrect in places. To improve: (1) Begin with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question. (2) Use correct tense and simple grammar (e.g., "I didn’t know how to ride"). (3) Provide one or two specific supporting details using linking words (e.g., "however", "so"). (4) Keep it concise (no more than 4–5 sentences). Work on pronunciation and word choice for clarity (e.g., use "siblings" instead of "sisters or brothers").

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. However, I didn’t know how to ride it at first, so my parents bought it and I practiced in the park. Over time I learned to ride and used it to visit friends and go to school.

建議: Your answer answers the question but is hesitant and vague. To improve: (1) Start with a clear, direct statement ("Yes, I think bikes are popular"). (2) Give specific reasons and brief examples, using linking words ("for example", "because"). (3) Avoid filler words ("uh") and unclear phrases ("don't have people to read"). (4) Use precise vocabulary ("parked" for bikes left unattended). Keep to 2–4 sentences with one or two concrete details.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient. For example, when I went to college I often saw many bikes parked outside buildings, and many students use them to commute to campus.

× Yes, of course, because when I was young my sisters or brothers can take the bike, but I don't come.

✓ Yes, of course, because when I was young my sisters or brothers could take the bike, but I could not.

The sentence misuses modal verbs and pronouns. 'Can' refers to present ability; for past ability use 'could' (Grammar Problem Type 4: Modal verb usage and Type 5: Past tense issue). 'I don't come' is incorrect for past inability; use 'I could not' or 'I couldn't'. Also ensure pronoun reference is clear: 'my sisters or brothers' is plural but acceptable; keep as is or use 'my siblings'. Suggestion: replace 'can' with 'could' and 'I don't come' with 'I could not'.

× But I don't have the skill of what ride the bike, so my parents just buy the.

✓ But I didn't have the skill to ride a bike, so my parents didn't buy one for me.

Multiple issues: tense should be past ('didn't have') to match 'when I was young' (Grammar Problem Type 5: Past tense issue). 'The skill of what ride the bike' is ungrammatical; use 'the skill to ride a bike' (incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs and sentence structure, Types 13 and 26). 'My parents just buy the' is present tense and missing object; use past 'didn't buy one for me' or 'didn't buy me one' (Article errors and verb tense). Suggestion: use 'didn't have the skill to ride a bike' and 'my parents didn't buy one for me'.

× Uh, yes, I think it's so popular because when I went to the college, I saw more bikes in at there and also some bikes don't have people to read and uh, it's and, uh, this bike.

✓ Uh, yes, I think they are very popular because when I went to college, I saw many bikes there, and some bikes were unused.

Multiple tense and word choice problems: 'I think it's so popular' should match plural 'bikes' so use 'they are' (Grammar Problem Type 6: Present tense issue and Type 27: Subject-verb agreement). 'When I went to the college' should be 'when I went to college' (article error, Type 22). 'I saw more bikes in at there' is ungrammatical; use 'I saw many bikes there' (preposition and adverb placement issues, Types 11 and 20). 'Some bikes don't have people to read' is semantically and grammatically wrong; likely meant 'some bikes had no one using them' or 'some bikes were abandoned/unused' (sentence structure and word choice, Types 26 and 13). Suggestion: use 'they are very popular', 'went to college', 'many bikes there', and 'some bikes were unused' or 'some bikes had no one using them'.