自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、文法や表現が不自然で冗長です。まず主題文（I didn’t have a bike.）で直接答えを提示し、その後に理由を短く明確に述べてください。接続詞（because, so）を正しく使い、不要な語句（praying with a doll を繰り返すなど）を避け、語順と動詞の使い方（be動詞や動名詞）を正すと自然になります。具体的には「I preferred playing with my dolls to riding a bike.」のように比較表現を使うと良いです。

範例: I didn’t have my own bike when I was a child. Instead, I preferred playing with my doll and dollhouse because I enjoyed imaginative play more than physical activities.

建議: 肯定はできていますが、発音のための“umm”や語彙の誤用（soothing は文脈に合わない）や文法の誤りが目立ちます。短く明確な主題文（Yes, bikes are popular in Japan.）を使い、その後に具体例（commuting, leisure cycling, bike lanes）を述べ、接続語（for example, especially）を入れて論理を明確にしてください。また「highway」は誤用で、「bike lanes」や「roads」「parks」などを使うと正確です。

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in Japan. For example, many people use them for commuting to work or school, and you can often see dedicated bike lanes and cyclists in parks.

× I did not have my own bike because I was not into activity rather than praying with a doll, so I preferred praying with the dollhouse and doll to exercise.

✓ I did not have my own bike because I was not into sports; instead, I preferred playing with a dollhouse and dolls.

The original sentence mixes incorrect word choices and structure. 'Into activity rather than praying with a doll' is unclear and uses 'praying' incorrectly; the intended meaning is likely enjoying play, so use 'into sports' and 'playing with a dollhouse and dolls'. 'Prefer' should compare activities with 'instead' or 'rather than'. Also 'dollhouse and doll' should be pluralized consistently. Suggestion: replace 'activity' with 'sports', use 'playing' not 'praying', use 'instead' to show contrast, and ensure plural forms match.

× Yes, of course umm riding bike is absolutely popular in my in Japan.

✓ Yes, of course, riding bikes is absolutely popular in Japan.

'Riding bike' is ungrammatical: use the gerund phrase 'riding bikes' or 'cycling'. Also 'in my in Japan' is redundant and incorrect; use 'in Japan'. 'Bikes' should be plural when speaking generally. Suggestion: use 'riding bikes' or 'cycling' and remove redundant words; include commas for natural speech pauses.

× Umm, I see a lot of people umm doing soothing on highway.

✓ I see a lot of people riding on the highway.

'Doing soothing' is incorrect and likely a misphrase of 'doing something' or 'riding'. If the intended meaning is people riding bikes on the highway, use 'riding on the highway' or 'cycling on the highway'. Also include an article if needed: 'the highway'. Suggestion: choose the correct verb 'riding' or 'cycling' and correct the noun phrase to 'on the highway'.