自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct and accurate: start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. "Yes, I did"). Correct grammar (past tense), avoid irrelevant words, and keep it concise (max 5 sentences). Use one or two specific supporting details linked logically (use linking words like "because" or "so"). For example, explain why you liked the bike and give a short example of an experience.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a bicycle when I was a child because I enjoyed the feeling of balancing and the freedom to go anywhere. For example, I often rode to my friend's house after school, which made me feel independent. It was exciting and helped me learn confidence and coordination.

建議: Answer directly with a clear opinion (e.g. "They were more popular in the past, but less so now"). Use correct tense and grammar, avoid repetition, and give specific reasons using linking words like "because" and "for example". Keep to 2–4 sentences and include one concrete example or statistic if possible.

範例: They were more popular in the past, but fewer people use bikes now. People prefer cars or public transport because they are more convenient and protect riders from extreme weather. For example, during very hot summers or rainy winters many commuters choose buses or the subway instead of cycling.

× Yes, I have a bag when I was a child because I like the sense of keeping balancing and you can have a your own vehicle to get away on the way.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child because I liked the feeling of keeping balance, and you could have your own vehicle to go places.

Problems: 'have' should be past tense 'had' to match 'when I was a child' (Grammar Problem Type ID 5: Past tense issue). 'like' should be past 'liked' for the same reason (ID 5). 'the sense of keeping balancing' is incorrect word choice and form; use 'the feeling of keeping balance' (ID 13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs / ID 8: Verb + -ing form). 'you can have a your own vehicle to get away on the way' has articles and awkward phrasing: remove extra 'a', change 'can' to 'could' to match past context (ID 5 and ID 22: Article errors). 'get away on the way' is unclear; use 'go places' or 'travel around'. Suggestion: keep verb tenses consistent (past when speaking about childhood), use correct article placement ('your' without 'a'), and prefer natural collocations like 'feelings of balance' or 'go places'.

× I think they will popular in the past but now people prefer have a car, have their own car or or take a bus or subway because it's more convenient and the weather is so hot or so cold so the morning.

✓ I think they were popular in the past, but now people prefer to have a car, have their own car, or take a bus or the subway because it's more convenient, and the weather can be very hot or very cold in the mornings.

Problems: 'they will popular in the past' mixes future modal and wrong adjective use; correct is 'they were popular in the past' (ID 5 Past tense issue and ID 13 Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs). 'prefer have a car' needs infinitive 'prefer to have' (ID 4 Modal verb usage / ID 8 Verb + -ing form — here infinitive required). Duplicate 'or' is redundant (ID 16 Incorrect conjunction use). Add article 'the' before 'subway' in many dialects (ID 17 Incorrect use of the definite article). 'the weather is so hot or so cold so the morning' has incorrect adverbial phrase; use 'can be very hot or very cold in the mornings' (ID 20 Incorrect adverb placement and ID 6 Present tense issue for general truth: 'can be' expresses variability). Suggestions: maintain correct past tense when comparing past and present, use 'prefer to' + verb, remove repeated words, include appropriate articles, and use clear temporal expressions like 'in the mornings'.