自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your response simply repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. To improve, give a direct short answer (yes/no), then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep to at most 4–5 sentences and avoid repeating the question. For example, state whether you had a bike, how old you were when you got it, who gave it to you or how often you used it, and a brief reason or memory.

範例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven as a birthday present from my parents, and I rode it to visit friends every weekend. Because there were few cars in our neighborhood, riding a bike felt safe and fun, and I remember learning to balance on a quiet street.

建議: Your answer is very short and contains an unnatural phrase (“but it's popular in our country”) that repeats the idea. To improve, respond directly, then expand with specific reasons and linking words (e.g., because, so, therefore). Provide concrete examples or comparisons (urban vs rural use, health or transport reasons) to make the answer informative and coherent. Keep to 2–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For instance, in cities there are dedicated bike lanes and shared-bike schemes, while in rural areas people often use bicycles for daily errands, so cycling remains a common and practical transport choice.

× Yes, but it's popular in our country.

✓ Yes, but they're popular in my country.

The student used 'it' and 'it's' (it is) to refer to 'bikes', which is plural. This is a pronoun and verb agreement error with third person singular. Replace 'it' with the plural pronoun 'they' and use the plural verb 'are'. Also change 'our country' to 'my country' to match the perspective of the individual student answering the question about their country. Suggestion: refer to plural nouns with plural pronouns and verbs (they are), and keep speaker perspective consistent (my country).