自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Organize your answer with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and coherent details. Start by directly answering (Yes/No), then give one or two specific reasons using correct tense and linking words (because, so, however). Avoid unclear phrases and repetition; keep it to 2–4 sentences. Also correct common errors: “When I was a child,” “I didn’t like bikes,” “I never asked my parents,” “I didn’t know how to ride,” and use “nowadays” or “recently” properly.

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because I wasn’t interested in cycling. I never asked my parents to buy one and I didn’t know how to ride a bicycle. However, recently I feel I would like to learn because it’s good exercise and convenient for short trips.

建議: Begin with a clear topic sentence and then add two specific supporting points connected by linking words (for example, because / such as / also). Avoid unclear vocabulary and odd word choices (e.g., “hijacking” is incorrect here). Be specific about contexts where bikes are used (commuting, exercise, leisure) and give a brief example. Keep answers concise and natural, 2–3 sentences is enough.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short commutes. For example, many people cycle to work or school, and others use mountain bikes for leisure trails and exercise.

× When I was child I did not have a bike because I didn't like it.

✓ When I was a child, I did not have a bike because I didn't like them.

Missing article 'a' before 'child' and pronoun reference: 'a child' is required; use a plural or neutral pronoun for general reference to bikes ('them') or 'one'/'a bike'. Suggestion: add 'a' and use consistent pronoun reference.'

× It never came to my mind to have one or two axe one to my parents and I don't know how to to ride a bike as well.

✓ It never occurred to me to ask my parents for one, and I didn't know how to ride a bike either.

Incorrect vocabulary and structure: 'came to my mind' is acceptable but 'to have one or two axe one to my parents' is ungrammatical; likely meant 'ask my parents for one'. Use past tense 'didn't know' to match time frame and 'either' instead of 'as well'. Also remove duplicated 'to'. Suggestion: use 'occurred to me' or 'came to my mind', and 'ask my parents for one'. Use consistent past tense.'

× But nowadays or two days I feel the need to.

✓ But nowadays I feel the need to (have a bike).

Confusing time expression 'or two days' and tense: 'nowadays' requires present tense 'feel', which is correct, but extra words make sentence unclear. Remove 'or two days' or replace with 'for the past two days' and adjust tense: 'For the past two days I have felt the need to.' Suggestion: choose one time marker and make verb tense consistent.'

× Yes definitely bikes are very popular in my country.

✓ Yes, definitely, bikes are very popular in my country.

Missing commas for clarity; article use is acceptable here because 'bikes' is plural and general. Add commas to separate discourse markers. Suggestion: include punctuation for natural spoken phrasing.'

× We see more and more people using bikes for daily activities or for for sports.

✓ We see more and more people using bikes for daily activities and for sports.

Redundant 'for for' is a typing error and conjunction choice: use 'and' to link activities. Suggestion: remove duplicate word and use 'and' to connect the two uses.'

× Like biking in in forest, umm for hijacking.

✓ For example, biking in the forest for recreation.

Multiple errors: repeated word 'in in', missing article 'the' before 'forest', and 'hijacking' is incorrect and likely a mispronunciation of 'hiking' or 'recreation'. The sentence fragment 'Like...' should be a full sentence. Suggestion: use 'For example, biking in the forest for recreation' or 'For example, biking in the forest or for hiking.'