自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Correct the grammar and give a clear, direct answer with one supporting detail. Use past tense, a topic sentence, and one brief detail. Keep it natural and concise (1–3 sentences).

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle that I rode to visit friends in my neighborhood every weekend.

建議: Organize your response: state your main opinion, then give specific reasons with linking words. Use correct vocabulary (inexpensive, convenient, commuters, students) and avoid filler words. Keep to 2–3 sentences and ensure subject-verb agreement and correct article use.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are inexpensive and convenient. For example, many students and commuters choose bicycles to avoid traffic and save money on transport, so you can often see many bikes parked near bus stations.

× Yes, I have bike when I was charged.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student used the wrong pronoun/word 'charged' and incorrect verb tense. 'Have' is present tense but the question asks about the past, so use past tense 'had' (matches Grammar Problem Type 5 Past tense issue and 12 Incorrect use of pronouns). Also 'bike' needs an article 'a'. 'Charged' is a wrong word; the intended word is 'child'. Suggestion: use 'I had a bike when I was a child.' to correctly express past possession and correct pronoun/word choice.

× Yes, but I get quite popular in my country because they are an in inexpensive and covenant way to get around Congress materials.

✓ Yes, they are quite popular in my country because they are an inexpensive and convenient way to get around.

Multiple errors: 'I get quite popular' incorrectly uses first person and present tense idea; the correct subject is 'they' (bikes). 'Get quite popular' is awkward; use 'are quite popular.' 'An in inexpensive' has extra article and word order error; use 'an inexpensive'. 'covenant' is wrong word; correct is 'convenient'. 'to get around Congress materials' is nonsense; remove and use 'to get around.' Suggestion: say 'Yes, they are quite popular in my country because they are an inexpensive and convenient way to get around.' which fixes subject, tense, articles, and word choice.

× For example, many student and commuters choose cycle linked to avoid traffic and save money on transport.

✓ For example, many students and commuters choose cycling to avoid traffic and save money on transport.

Errors: 'many student' should be plural 'many students' (Grammar Problem Type 1 Singular and plural issue). 'Choose cycle linked' is incorrect phrasing; use 'choose cycling' or 'choose to cycle.' 'Linked' is extraneous. Suggestion: use 'many students and commuters choose cycling' or 'choose to cycle' to express the habitual action and correct plural forms.

× I also are usually seen uh, many time uh, bicycles bikes around.

✓ I also usually see many bicycles around.

Multiple issues: 'I also are usually seen' mixes passive and wrong verb form; 'are' does not agree with subject 'I' (Grammar Problem Type 27 Subject-verb agreement errors and 2 Third person singular issue). 'seen' improperly uses passive voice here; the speaker should use active 'see.' 'many time' should be 'many times' or 'often.' 'bicycles bikes' is redundant; use one noun. Suggestion: say 'I also usually see many bicycles around.' which fixes agreement, voice, plurality and redundancy.