自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (e.g., “enthusiastic” → “enthusiastically” or better “I loved riding it”), and avoid redundancy. Use one or two supporting details with a linking word. Also correct tense and word forms: “was riding too enthusiast” is ungrammatical. Keep to maximum 3–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, I did. I loved riding my bike when I was a child and spent hours cycling around the neighborhood. However, as I grew older I lost interest and now I don’t own or ride a bike.

建議: Make your opinion direct and use clearer linking words and grammar. Avoid filler sounds (“uh”) and repeated phrases. Give one or two specific reasons with proper sentence structure and a linking phrase (e.g., “because,” “therefore”). Use slightly wider vocabulary like “unsafe” or “lack of infrastructure.”

範例: Not really. In my city cycling is uncommon because the streets are very crowded and there is little cycling infrastructure, so it feels unsafe. Therefore most people prefer public transport or cars instead of bikes.

× I did have a bike when I was a child and I really was riding too enthusiast, but as I grew up this interest eventually faded.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child and I used to ride it very enthusiastically, but as I grew up this interest eventually faded.

The original uses 'did have' unnecessarily for a simple past statement; use simple past 'had' (present perfect not required). 'was riding' suggests a continuous action at a specific past time; 'used to ride' better expresses a habitual past action. 'enthusiast' is a noun; the adverb 'enthusiastically' is required after the verb. Also include the object 'it' for clarity. Suggestion: use simple past or 'used to' for past habits and convert adjective to adverb when modifying a verb. Grammar problem type ID:8

× Now I do not ride and I do not own a bike.

✓ Now I do not ride and I do not own a bike.

No grammatical change needed; sentence correctly uses present simple to describe current habitual state. Keep as is to match the question about current behavior. Grammar problem type ID:6

× I believe not really because, uh, I live in a city and is a crowded and very populated city and uh, lots of traffic and there is actually no specific place for riding bikes.

✓ I don't really think so because I live in a crowded, densely populated city with lots of traffic and there is actually no specific place to ride bikes.

The original has missing subject 'it' or wrong verb form 'is' after 'and'; better to restructure the sentence. Use 'I don't really think so' for natural negation. 'Crowded' and 'densely populated' are adjective phrases; place them before 'city' with correct order and commas. Use 'to ride bikes' (infinitive) rather than 'for riding bikes' for indicating purpose. Also combine clauses to avoid repeated 'and uh'. Grammar problem type ID:12

× So it is also dangerous.

✓ So it is also dangerous.

Sentence is grammatically correct; no article needed. It appropriately uses 'it' to refer to the situation already described. Keep as is. Grammar problem type ID:22

× So people are not really into biking in my country.

✓ Therefore, people in my country are not really into biking.

Original is understandable but word order is slightly awkward. Moving the adverbial phrase 'in my country' earlier clarifies the subject and improves flow. 'Therefore' or 'So' can be used; ensure placement matches desired emphasis. This is a stylistic improvement rather than a strict grammatical correction. Grammar problem type ID:26