自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Correct grammar and be concise. Start with a clear topic sentence using past tense (e.g. “Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.”). Then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words (because/so/and). Avoid repetition and keep it within 3–4 sentences. Fix common errors: 'have' -> 'had', 'were' -> 'was', remove extra words like repeated 'for'.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it to the park and to school with my friends, because it was an easy and fun way to get around. I remember racing along the riverside path on weekends.

建議: Be specific and use correct grammar and linking words. Begin with a clear opinion sentence (e.g. “Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country.”). Then give 1–2 specific reasons or examples, using linking words like 'because' or 'for example'. Correct common mistakes: 'All people are prefer' -> 'Many people prefer', avoid vague phrases like 'It is also seen'.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people prefer them because they are affordable and convenient for short trips, especially in crowded cities. For example, commuter bikes and electric bikes are common sights during rush hour.

× Yes, I have a bag when I were a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student mixes present and past tenses and uses wrong nouns. The context is a past habitual situation, so use past simple 'had' and 'was'. Also 'bag' should be 'bike' to answer the examiner's question. Suggestion: Use past simple for events or states in childhood (I had, I was).

× I'm using my bike for for going parks schools with my friends.

✓ I used my bike to go to parks and schools with my friends.

The examiner asked about childhood, so past simple 'used' is correct rather than present continuous. 'For going' is incorrect; use 'to go' or 'for going to' with 'to' before places. Also remove duplicate 'for'. Plural nouns 'parks' and 'schools' need 'to' before them: 'to parks and schools'. Suggestion: For past habits, use 'used to' or past simple; use 'to go to' for movement to places and avoid duplicate words.

× All people are prefer to buy bike.

✓ Many people prefer to buy bikes.

'All people' is too absolute and uncommon here; 'many people' is more natural. 'Are prefer' incorrectly combines auxiliary with base verb; use simple present 'prefer' for general truths. Also 'bike' should be plural 'bikes' after 'buy' when speaking generally. Suggestion: Use simple present for habits/general truths and match pluralization: 'Many people prefer to buy bikes.'

× It is also seen.

✓ You can also see many people riding bikes.

'It is also seen' is an unnatural passive phrase in English. Rephrase to an active, clear observation: 'You can also see many people riding bikes' or 'Bikes are also commonly seen.' Suggestion: Use active constructions or a natural passive: 'Bikes are also commonly seen.'

× In some sometimes.

✓ Sometimes.

'In some sometimes' is redundant and ungrammatical. Use the single adverb 'Sometimes' to indicate occasional frequency. Place adverbs of frequency correctly (usually before the main verb or at the end): 'Sometimes people cycle to work.' Suggestion: Replace the phrase with a single, correctly placed adverb such as 'sometimes.'