自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be clearer and more grammatical: start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (plural/singular, articles) and remove filler phrases such as “you know” and hesitation words. Keep answers to no more than 4–5 concise sentences.

範例: Yes, I did. In my hometown almost every child owned a bike because we lived in the countryside. For example, I used my bike to go to school and visit friends about 2–3 kilometres away. Also, it was the most practical and affordable way to get around.

建議: Directly answer the question, then provide organized supporting reasons with linking words. Fix pronunciation/spelling errors (e.g., 'bikes'), subject-verb agreement, and avoid repeating filler phrases. Give one or two specific reasons or examples (e.g., cost, traffic, exercise).

範例: Yes, I think bikes are still popular across the country. In rural areas they are common because they are cheap and practical, while in cities many people use bikes to avoid traffic and for exercise. For instance, some commuters cycle to work to save time during rush hour.

× Every children in our hometown had a bike because, you know, we were in the countryside, so bike was the most friendly transportation we we could use.

✓ Every child in our hometown had a bike because, you know, we were in the countryside, so the bike was the most convenient form of transportation we could use.

Use singular noun 'child' with 'every' (singular) instead of plural 'children'; add definite article 'the' before 'bike' when referring to it in a general sense in that context; replace 'most friendly transportation' with 'most convenient form of transportation' for natural collocation and clarity; remove duplicate word 'we'. Suggestions: use 'every' + singular noun, include appropriate articles ('the'), and choose natural adjective-noun combinations (convenient + transportation).

× Like it's convenient for us to travel over the near or far.

✓ It was convenient for us to travel to nearby or distant places.

The sentence uses incorrect prepositions and adjective forms: 'over the near or far' is ungrammatical. Use adjectives 'nearby' and 'distant' or 'near' and 'far' with a noun like 'places'. Also match tense with previous clause 'we were in the countryside' (past), so use 'was' not 'is'. Suggestion: use 'It was convenient for us to travel to nearby or distant places.'

× Yes, as I said earlier, buy bites are common in the countryside and also it's the same situation in the city because you know, there are so many vehicles in the city and you know, riding a bike feel like a getaway for people.

✓ Yes, as I said earlier, bikes are common in the countryside and the situation is similar in the city because there are so many vehicles there, and riding a bike feels like a getaway for people.

Multiple issues: 'buy bites' appears to be misheard/misspelled and should be 'bikes' (noun). Use 'the situation is similar' instead of 'it's the same situation'. Replace repeated 'you know' for clarity. Use 'there' to avoid repeating 'in the city'. Subject-verb agreement: 'riding a bike feels' (singular subject 'riding' requires singular verb 'feels'). Suggestions: correct misspellings, use clearer connectors ('the situation is similar'), avoid repetition, and ensure subject-verb agreement for gerund subjects.