自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammar, pronunciation, and provide a clear topic sentence followed by one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct key words (bike, not wake), use plural/singular and articles, and fix tense and countability errors. Also add a brief reason with linking phrase (e.g., 'because' or 'so'). Keep answers concise (1–3 sentences).

範例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My parents didn't allow me to ride one because they were worried about road safety, so I learned to walk and take the bus instead.

建議: Provide a direct topic sentence and a specific reason with a linking word. Correct grammar (e.g., 'I think they are not very popular in my country' or 'I think bicycles are quite popular'). Use appropriate subject-verb agreement and include one supporting detail such as where people use bikes or who uses them. Keep it natural and concise.

範例: I think bicycles are not very popular in my country because most people prefer cars for long distances, although some cities have started promoting cycling lanes for short commutes.

× 'I did not have a wake when I was a child because my parents did not allow it for safety reason.'

✓ 'I did not have a bike when I was a child because my parents did not allow it for safety reasons.'

'wake' is the wrong word; the intended noun is 'bike' and 'reason' should be plural as 'safety reasons' when referring to general concerns. Also ensure word choice is correct: use 'bike' for bicycle. Suggestion: replace 'wake' with 'bike' and use 'safety reasons' to match natural English.'

× 'I think might not popular in your country.'

✓ 'I think bikes might not be popular in your country.'

'I think might not popular in your country' is missing the subject 'bikes', the auxiliary verb 'be', and has incorrect word order. The correct modal construction is "might not be" plus the adjective 'popular'. Suggestion: include the subject (bikes), use the modal 'might' with 'be', and place 'in your country' at the end.'