自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is grammatically correct but too brief and lacks supporting details. To improve, begin with a clear topic sentence, then add 1–2 specific supporting details (e.g., what kind of bike, who gave it to you, when you learned to ride, a memory). Use a linking word to connect ideas and keep responses natural and concise (maximum 5 sentences).

範例: Yes — I had a small red bicycle when I was about six. It was a gift from my parents, and I learned to ride it in our local park. Because it had training wheels at first, I felt confident quickly and enjoyed cycling around with my friends.

建議: The answer answers the question but is too short and lacks justification. Improve by stating your opinion clearly, then support it with specific reasons or examples (e.g., common uses, cycling infrastructure, cultural or economic factors). Use a linking phrase like 'because' or 'for example' to make your response coherent and persuasive.

範例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, cities have dedicated bike lanes and you often see students and delivery workers cycling, which makes cycling both practical and common.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The sentence is grammatically correct and matches the past-tense context of the question; no changes needed.

× Yes, I think so.

✓ Yes, I think so.

The sentence is grammatically correct for the present-tense opinion question; no changes needed.