自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more direct and organized: start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + brief detail), then give one or two specific supporting points. Reduce hesitations and filler words (uh, um). Use correct tense and concise phrasing (e.g., 'I had a bike when I was a child'). Add a brief detail about who taught you or how you used it. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father taught me to ride when I was about six, and we often practised together in the park on weekends. I enjoyed cycling because it gave me freedom and a chance to play outdoors.

建議: Answer directly, then support with two specific reasons using linking words (for example, because/since/also). Avoid fillers and correct grammar (e.g., 'people riding bikes', 'bike deliveries by Uber'). Be specific about where and why bikes are common (cities, commuting, delivery services). Keep to 2–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially in cities. For example, many people ride bikes to work because it is faster in traffic, and delivery workers often use bikes for services like Uber Eats. As a result, you see bicycles everywhere during rush hour.

× Yes, I have a about uh, I had a bike thing and I was a child and uh uh, with using the bike, uh, I practice left like a bike with my father.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I practiced riding it with my father.

Grammar problem type ID:5 (Past tense issue), ID:27 (Subject-verb agreement errors), ID:26 (Sentence structure errors). The student mixes present and past tense ('have' and 'had') in a context that requires past tense: use 'had' for possession in childhood. The phrase 'a about' is incorrect; remove extra article and filler words. 'I practice left like a bike' is ungrammatical; the intended meaning is 'practiced riding it'. Also ensure subject-verb agreement: 'I practiced' matches past tense. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense for past events, remove fillers, and use the verb 'ride' with appropriate form ('practiced riding it').

× Yes, I think it is very popular in the town because I often see uh, people who riding a bike and uh, recently, umm, there are very common with uh, using a bike and uh, deliver through Uber.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my town because I often see people riding bikes, and recently it has become very common to use a bike for deliveries through Uber.

Grammar problem type ID:27 (Subject-verb agreement errors), ID:8 (Verb + -ing form), ID:6 (Present tense issue), ID:26 (Sentence structure errors). 'I think it is very popular' mismatches the plural noun 'bikes' — use 'bikes are'. 'People who riding a bike' is incorrect; after 'who' use a finite verb ('ride') or use the -ing form without 'who' ('people riding bikes'). The fragment 'there are very common with using a bike' is ungrammatical; express the idea as 'it has become very common to use a bike for deliveries' or 'using bikes for deliveries is very common'. Also ensure present perfect 'has become' for a recent trend. Suggestion: match plural subjects with plural verbs, use correct clause structures ('people who ride' or 'people riding'), and rephrase awkward fragments into clear expressions like 'common to use a bike for deliveries through Uber'.