自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và mạch lạc: câu trả lời nên có câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ: "it was faster and more fun than walking"), tránh từ ngữ lặp và dư thừa, và mở rộng bằng một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: nơi bạn đi, ai bạn đi cùng, hoặc cảm xúc khi đi). Hãy dùng liên từ đơn giản như "because", "so", hoặc "and" để nối ý và giữ tổng số câu không quá 5.

範例: Yes. My parents bought me a small red bike when I was eight. I usually rode it to school every day because it was faster and more fun than walking. I often rode with my neighbour, and we would race on the way, which made the trip enjoyable.

建議: Sửa cấu trúc câu và dùng từ phù hợp: hãy bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó nêu lý do cụ thể với cấu trúc đúng (ví dụ: "because people are worried about..."), tránh lỗi từ ("to to", "reduce" cần chia dạng phù hợp), và thêm ví dụ cụ thể hoặc so sánh để làm ý rõ hơn. Dùng liên từ như "because", "so", hoặc "for example" để nối các ý một cách mạch lạc.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people are concerned about environmental pollution. As a result, more people choose to cycle in their daily lives, which helps reduce traffic congestion and improves health. For example, many cities now have bike lanes and public bike-sharing schemes.

× When I was a child, my parents bought me a bike. I usually rode it to school every day because work faster and more fun than working.

✓ When I was a child, my parents bought me a bike. I usually rode it to school every day because it was faster and more fun than walking.

The error is subject-verb agreement and missing subject: 'work faster' lacks the correct subject and tense for the past context. The student is contrasting riding with walking, so 'it was faster and more fun' (past tense) is correct, and 'walking' is the correct noun form (gerund) to compare with riding. Suggestion: include the subject 'it' and use past tense 'was' to match 'rode', and use 'walking' instead of 'working'.

× Yes, because our concerns are environmental pollution, people to to cycle in their daily life.

✓ Yes, because due to environmental pollution, people tend to cycle in their daily lives.

The original sentence has incorrect preposition and word choices: 'our concerns are environmental pollution' is awkward and 'people to to cycle' is incorrect. Use 'due to' to indicate cause, 'tend to' to express common behavior, and 'daily lives' (plural) to match 'people'. Suggestion: rephrase to 'due to environmental pollution, people tend to cycle in their daily lives.'

× Cycling is not only reduce traffic congestions but also good for the health.

✓ Cycling not only reduces traffic congestion but is also good for health.

Errors include incorrect verb form 'reduce' after 'not only' and article/word form issues: use 'reduces' to agree with singular subject 'Cycling' and use uncountable 'congestion' (not plural), and 'good for health' (no article needed) or 'good for the health' only in specific contexts. Also mirror structure: 'not only reduces... but is also...' for parallelism. Suggestion: use present simple 'reduces' for general truth and maintain parallel structure.