自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 문장이 자연스럽지 않고 문법 오류와 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 예: 시제 일관성(과거 경험을 말할 때는 과거형 사용), 동사 선택 및 어순 수정, 중복 표현 제거(‘like a like riding bike’). 또한 주제문을 명확히 하고 추가 설명을 연결어로 자연스럽게 덧붙이세요. 구체적으로 연령, 누가 가르쳤는지, 어디에서 주로 탔는지 같은 세부 정보를 추가하면 좋습니다.

範例: Yes. I had a bike when I was a child and I learned to ride it when I was seven. My father taught me in the park near our house, and I quickly became confident riding on quiet paths. Since then I enjoyed cycling as a fun way to spend time outdoors.

建議: 내용은 좋지만 문법과 표현을 다듬어 더 자연스럽게 말하세요. 예: 주어-동사 일치, 관사 사용, 어순 수정, 그리고 연결어로 이유를 명확히 제시하세요. 구체적인 예(어떤 계층이나 도시에서 특히 인기 있는지, 통계적 느낌의 표현)를 추가하면 더욱 설득력 있습니다.

範例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country. Many students cycle to school and some adults commute to work by bike because it is cheap and environmentally friendly. For example, in smaller cities cycling is very common due to short distances and limited public transport.

× Yes, I have a bike and I can ride a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike and I could ride it.

The question asks about the past ('when you were a child'), so present tense verbs 'have' and 'can' are incorrect; use past tense 'had' and 'could'. Also replace the repeated noun with the pronoun 'it' for naturalness.

× When I was seven years old I thought to my dad to ride a bike and I saw that I like a like riding bike.

✓ When I was seven years old I asked my dad to teach me how to ride a bike and I realised that I liked riding bikes.

Multiple issues: 'thought to my dad to ride a bike' is incorrect verb and preposition use — should be 'asked my dad to teach me' (verb + object + infinitive). Tense consistency: 'I saw that I like' should be past tense 'I realised that I liked'. Use 'riding bikes' (general) or 'riding a bike'. 'Realised' or 'saw' better conveys understanding in past. Also correct collocation 'teach me how to ride'.

× I think yes.

✓ Yes, I think so.

In response to 'Do you think bikes are popular...' the natural reply is 'Yes, I think so.' 'I think yes' is unidiomatic; use 'so' as a pronoun referring to the idea in the question.

× In my country many people ride a bike when they are go to school.

✓ In my country many people ride a bike when they go to school.

The phrase 'are go to school' is incorrect; use the simple present 'go' for habitual actions: 'they go to school'. Remove the auxiliary 'are'.

× They go to school or go to company because bicycle is very eco friendly and cheap.

✓ They go to school or go to work because bicycles are very eco-friendly and cheap.

Several corrections: 'go to company' is incorrect collocation; use 'go to work'. Article and number: use plural 'bicycles' and plural verb 'are' for general statements. Add hyphen in 'eco-friendly' and use 'cheap' as adjective. Also include 'the' only when specific; here general statement uses plural without article.