自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Give a direct topic sentence then expand with one or two brief supporting details using linking words. Mention when you had the bike, who it belonged to, what kind it was, or a short memory to make the answer specific and natural. Keep it under five sentences and avoid repeating the examiner's question.

範例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven; it was a small red bicycle with training wheels. I learned to ride it in the park near my house, and I remember my father helping me practice every weekend until I could ride on my own.

建議: Start with a clear opinion sentence, then support it with specific reasons or examples using linking words (for example, because, so, therefore). Use correct grammar and avoid vague phrasing. Mention who rides bikes, for what purposes, and any trends or facts to make the response concrete and coherent.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, in cities you can see students and office workers cycling to work, and recently there has been an increase in bike-sharing schemes, so more people choose cycling as a convenient and cheap option.

× Of course, most of people were riding now.

✓ Of course, most people are riding them now.

The original sentence mixes past tense 'were' with the time adverb 'now', causing a tense inconsistency. Also 'most of people' is incorrect word order; the correct form is 'most people' or 'most of the people'. Additionally, the verb needs present continuous 'are riding' to match 'now', and a pronoun or noun for the object (them/bikes) should be included. Suggestion: use present continuous for ongoing actions with 'now' and use 'most people' instead of 'most of people'.