自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan struktur kalimat agar lebih alami dan jelas. Hindari kesalahan seperti 'use to' dan kata yang tidak perlu ('NA'). Mulai dengan kalimat topik singkat, lalu tambahkan satu atau dua detail pendukung dengan kata penghubung yang tepat. Misalnya jelaskan seberapa sering Anda menggunakannya atau kegiatan yang biasa dilakukan.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used it almost every day to ride around my neighborhood and play games with my friends, so it became my favorite way to spend the afternoons.

建議: Perbaiki tata bahasa, pengulangan kata ('when when'), dan ketepatan waktu (had -> have). Susun jawaban dengan kalimat utama diikuti alasan yang jelas dan contoh konkret. Gunakan kata penghubung seperti 'because' atau 'for example' untuk membuat penjelasan lebih logis.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and daily commuting. For example, I often see people riding bikes to the market or to work along main streets.

× I had a bike when I was a child and I usually use to play with my NA neighborhood and friends.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child and I usually used to play with my neighborhood and friends.

The phrase 'use to' is incorrect; the correct form for habitual actions in the past is 'used to'. Also 'NA' is extraneous and should be removed. Use 'used to' to indicate past habitual actions. Suggestion: say 'I usually used to play with my neighborhood and friends.'

× Yes I do because a lot of people had it and also using it when when I walk in the street they use a bike to transport.

✓ Yes, I do, because a lot of people have them and use them; when I walk in the street I see people using bikes for transport.

Multiple tense and agreement problems: 'had' (past) should be 'have' to match present-tense 'I do'. 'It' should be plural 'them' to agree with 'a lot of people'. 'Using it' is a fragment; change to 'use them' for correct verb form. 'When when I walk' has duplicated 'when' and the tense should be present: 'when I walk... I see people using bikes for transport.' Suggestion: keep present tense throughout and ensure subject-verb and number agreement.