自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Jawabanmu sangat singkat dan tata bahasa keliru (seharusnya past tense). Berikan kalimat topik yang jelas dan tambahkan 1–2 detail pendukung menggunakan linking word seperti "because" atau "when". Contoh perbaikan: gunakan past tense, sebutkan siapa yang memberinya atau bagaimana kamu menggunakannya, dan batasi jawaban hingga maksimal 5 kalimat.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about eight because my parents bought it for my birthday. I used to ride it to my friend’s house every afternoon, which helped me learn balance and independence.

建議: Jawabanmu langsung dan mengandung alasan, tapi tata bahasa dan kosakata perlu diperbaiki (gunakan "they" bukan "it", dan tambahkan spesifik contoh atau konteks). Perlu juga memakai linking words yang tepat seperti "because", "for example", atau "mainly" untuk membuat alasan lebih kuat. Usahakan 2–4 kalimat yang jelas dan spesifik.

範例: Yes, I think they are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting. For example, students and workers often ride bicycles to avoid traffic and save money on transport.

× I have it.

✓ I had one.

The examiner's question uses past tense 'Did you have... when you were a child?' so the student should use past tense. 'I have it' is present tense and also uses 'it' which is vague. Use 'I had one' to indicate possession of a bike in the past. Suggestion: match the verb tense to the question (past simple) and use 'one' or 'a bike' for clarity.

× Yes, I do, because a lot of people have it.

✓ Yes, I do, because a lot of people have them.

The phrase 'a lot of people' is plural, so the pronoun referring to 'bikes' must be plural ('them'), not singular ('it'). Also ensure the verb 'have' is correct for plural subject. Suggestion: use 'them' or repeat the noun 'bikes' for clarity: 'a lot of people have bikes.'