自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Focus on clarity, grammar, and relevant details. Begin with a clear topic sentence in the past tense, avoid incorrect verbs (e.g., "bite" -> "ride" or "use"), and keep answers concise (no more than 4–5 sentences). Use linking words to add one or two specific supporting details (who you rode with, where you rode, or a memorable moment). Also correct possessive and tense errors ("it's my friends" -> "my friends"; "they ever said" -> "they always said").

範例: I had a bicycle when I was a child and it was very special to me. I rode it every day around my neighborhood and to the small market near my house. Often my friends and I would race each other on quiet streets, which made riding very fun. Because of that, I remember that bike very fondly.

建議: Answer directly and use accurate vocabulary and grammar. Start with a clear statement ("Yes, bikes are popular"). Give one or two clear reasons with linking words (e.g., "because" and "so") and use correct comparative forms ("more than cars"). Avoid unrelated words like "career" and correct sentence structure ("there are more middle-class people"). Keep it to 3–4 sentences with specific examples (urban commuting, cost, traffic).

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. This is mainly because many people are middle class and find bicycles more affordable than cars. Also, in crowded cities bikes are easier for short trips and avoid heavy traffic, so you see far more bicycles than cars on the streets.

× Yeah, I have a bicycle.

✓ Yeah, I had a bicycle.

The examiner asked about the past ('when you were a child'), so the student should use past tense. 'Have' is present tense; change to 'had' to match the time frame.

× When I was a child, it was very special to me.

✓ When I was a child, it was very special to me.

This sentence is grammatically correct in past tense and matches the time frame, so no change is needed. (Included for completeness.)

× I used to bite it every day.

✓ I used to ride it every day.

The verb 'bite' is incorrect in context; 'used to' is followed by the base form of the verb. The intended action for a bicycle is 'ride', not 'bite'. Use 'I used to ride'.

× Since I got the bike, I used to ride that bicycle to charge and markets to buy something.

✓ Since I got the bike, I have ridden that bicycle to the market to buy things.

After 'since' we normally use present perfect to describe actions from that past time to now. 'Used to' indicates a past habit and contradicts 'since'. Also 'to charge and markets' is incorrect: likely 'to the market' and 'to buy things'. Use present perfect 'have ridden' and correct prepositions and nouns.

× I also show it to it's my friends and they ever said it's very suitable to you.

✓ I also showed it to my friends and they often said it was very suitable for me.

Multiple issues: 'show' should be past 'showed' to match past context; 'it's my friends' is incorrect possessive and contraction—use 'my friends'; 'they ever said' is incorrect adverb 'ever'—use 'often' or 'always' if intended; 'it's very suitable to you' has wrong subject/object and tense—should be 'it was very suitable for me' to match past perspective. Also use 'for' with 'suitable'.

× Yes, in my career bikes are really popular because in my country there are more people is middle class so they can afford a bike neither than a car.

✓ Yes, in my country bikes are really popular because there are more middle-class people, so they can afford a bike rather than a car.

'In my career' is wrong contextually; use 'in my country'. 'There are more people is middle class' has subject-verb and noun phrase errors—use 'there are more middle-class people'. 'Neither than a car' is incorrect; use 'rather than a car' to show preference/contrast.

× So bikes are very popular.

✓ So bikes are very popular.

This sentence is correct; plural 'bikes' matches the plural predicate 'are'. No change needed.

× In my country I see a lot of bikes more than car and I think it's very popular.

✓ In my country I see many more bikes than cars and I think they are very popular.

Compare quantities requires plural 'cars' not 'car'. 'A lot of bikes more than car' is awkward; 'many more bikes than cars' is clearer. 'It' referring to bikes is incorrect singular pronoun; use 'they are' to agree with plural 'bikes'.