自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cần trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và cung cấp thêm 1–2 chi tiết hỗ trợ. Tránh sử dụng từ không liên quan hoặc câu hỏi lại người phỏng vấn. Nên giữ độ dài tối đa 3–5 câu và dùng liên từ để nối ý nếu mô tả thêm.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bicycle that my parents bought for me when I was seven, and I used to ride it to the park every weekend. I remember practicing hard until I could ride without training wheels, which made me very proud.

建議: Cần mở rộng câu trả lời với lý do và ví dụ cụ thể, dùng liên từ để làm câu mạch lạc. Tránh trả lời quá ngắn; mục tiêu là 2–4 câu với từ vựng phù hợp liên quan chủ đề.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities where traffic is heavy and people want an affordable, convenient way to travel. For example, many students and office workers use bicycles or shared bike services for short journeys, and cycling is also common in rural areas for daily errands.

× Cortana. You guys who are that?

✓ Who are you guys?

The original sentence uses incorrect word order and pronoun placement. The correct English question form is 'Who are you?' or plural 'Who are you guys?'. Move the subject 'you guys' after the question word 'who' and include the correct verb 'are'. Suggestion: Use the standard question word order: question word + verb + subject.

× Yeah.

✓ Yes, I think so.

A single-word response 'Yeah' is colloquial and not a full sentence. To fit the examiner's question 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' provide a complete sentence such as 'Yes, I think so.' or 'Yes, they are popular.' This fixes sentence structure by including subject and verb and matches the question's tense and scope.