自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be natural, grammatically correct, and a bit more specific. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two supporting details using correct verb forms and linking words. Avoid short fragments and errors (e.g., "liked play" → "liked playing").

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I loved riding it around my neighborhood, especially on weekend afternoons, because it gave me freedom and a chance to explore with my friends.

建議: Make your response fluent and accurate. Use linking words and correct noun/verb forms, and be specific about where and why people ride bikes. Avoid hesitations and repetitions. For example, say where people ride and add a reason or personal habit.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in Korea. Many people often cycle along rivers and in parks for exercise and relaxation, and I enjoy riding there on weekends because the paths are scenic and traffic-free.

× I really liked play outside.

✓ I really liked playing outside.

The verb 'like' when referring to an activity uses the -ing form (gerund) of the following verb. 'Liked play' is incorrect because 'play' must be 'playing' after 'liked'. Suggestion: use 'I really liked playing outside' or 'I really enjoyed playing outside'.

× Many people usually ride a bikes around river or parks.

✓ Many people usually ride bikes around rivers or parks.

The noun 'bikes' should agree with the plural context without the indefinite article 'a'. Also 'river' should be plural 'rivers' (or use 'the river') or use 'around the river or parks'. Suggestion: remove 'a' before 'bikes' and make place nouns plural or add 'the' as appropriate.

× I also play uh sorry I also enjoying play riding.

✓ I also... sorry, I also enjoy riding.

The sentence mixes forms. After the verb 'enjoy', use the -ing form: 'enjoy riding'. Also 'play' should be removed if redundant. Use present tense 'enjoy' to match habitual action. Suggestion: say 'I also enjoy riding' or 'I also used to enjoy riding' depending on time reference.

× Yes, in Korea bikes are very popular.

✓ Yes, in Korea bikes are very popular.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable, but note that 'in Korea' is fine and 'bikes are very popular' uses correct present simple for general fact. No change needed.

× Many people usually ride a bikes around river or parks.

✓ Many people usually ride bikes around rivers or parks.

The article 'a' is incorrect before the plural noun 'bikes'. Either use singular with 'a bike' or plural without an article. Also 'around river' needs an article ('the river') or plural 'rivers'. Suggestion: 'ride bikes around the river' or 'ride bikes around rivers or parks'.