自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be clear, grammatically correct and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence that answers the question, then give one brief supporting detail. Avoid repetition and fix the tense/word order. Use linking words if you add details.

範例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked to school or took the bus, so I wasn’t very familiar with riding. As a result, I only learned to ride much later, when I was a teenager.

建議: Give a clear direct answer, then add specific, well-organized supporting details using linking words. Use correct nouns and prepositions (e.g., "in parks", "in cities"). Avoid vague phrases like "some bikes roaming around" and correct redundancy.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in the Philippines. For example, many people use bicycles for short trips in cities and for exercise in parks, and bike-sharing schemes have also become more common in recent years.

× Had a bike when I was a child.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

This sentence lacks a subject and auxiliary verb, creating a fragment. In the context (replying to 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?') the correct negative response requires the subject I plus the auxiliary did not: 'I didn't have a bike when I was a child.' Suggestion: always include subject and correct auxiliary for past simple negatives (I did not + base verb).

× There are some bikes roaming around in any parks, cities, malls and other popular are free popular places.

✓ There are some bikes roaming around in parks, cities, malls and other popular free places.

Several preposition and word-choice problems: 'in any parks' is incorrect in this context; use 'in parks' or 'around parks'. The phrase 'other popular are free popular places' is ungrammatical and seems to aim for 'other popular free places.' Also 'roaming around' is acceptable but 'around' alone would suffice. Suggestion: simplify the list with parallel structure: 'in parks, cities, malls and other popular free places.'

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in the Philippines.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in the Philippines.

This sentence is grammatically correct: subject 'bikes' and verb 'are' agree in plural. No correction needed. Provided here for completeness. Suggestion: no change required.