自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and directly addresses the question, but it can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy (e.g., "I didn't have a bike when I was a child" and then repeating childhood context). Add a brief specific detail or short reason to enrich your response and use a linking word for coherence.

範例: No, I didn't own a bike as a child. However, my neighbor had one that I often borrowed to ride around the neighborhood, which helped me learn balance and confidence.

建議: Your answer is relevant and gives examples, but contains grammatical errors and some repetition. Improve verb agreement ("people who use bikes"), reduce redundancy (don't repeat the conclusion), and add a linking phrase to organize examples more smoothly. Also try to include one specific statistic or contrast to make it more informative.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many students use bicycles to get to school and vendors often cycle to the market; additionally, parks are full of families riding for leisure, so cycling is common in both daily life and recreation.

× In fact, there are a lot of people who uses bike when going to school, when going to the market or when playing in the park.

✓ In fact, there are a lot of people who use bikes when going to school, when going to the market, or when playing in the park.

The relative clause subject 'people' is plural, so the verb must be the base form 'use' (not 'uses') — this is a subject-verb agreement error (ID 27). Also, 'bike' should be plural 'bikes' to match 'people' and to indicate general use. Adding a comma before 'or' improves readability. Suggestion: use plural verbs with plural subjects and make nouns plural when referring to people in general.'