自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Keep answers relevant and concise. Start with a clear direct response (topic sentence) then add one or two supported details using correct tense and simple linking words. Avoid repeating the examiner's question and incorrect grammar (use past tense: 'I didn’t have', 'when I was a child'). You can say why you didn't have a bike and mention any related memory briefly.

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I couldn’t afford one and my parents preferred I focus on schoolwork. As a result, I never learned to ride, so I still don’t own a bike now.

建議: Respond directly and give specific reasons with clear linking words. Avoid fillers like 'uh' and repetitions. Use plural/singular correctly (e.g., 'many people use them' not 'people's are used by'). Provide one or two concrete reasons (cost, traffic, environment) and an example or result.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and help avoid traffic congestion. For example, many commuters ride bicycles for short trips in the city, which reduces travel time and saves money.

× Hello, my name is Did you have a Did you have a bike when you were a child? No, I don't have any bike when I was child. I don't know how to ride a bike.

✓ Hello, my name is [Name]. Did you have a bike when you were a child? No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I don't know how to ride a bike.

This response contains multiple sentence structure and tense problems. The student repeats question text and inserts it incorrectly into a self-introduction; that is a sentence structure error (ID 26). 'No, I don't have any bike when I was child' mixes present simple ('don't have') with a past time reference ('when I was child') and omits the article 'a' before 'child' and 'bike', causing tense and article errors. Use past simple 'didn't have' for past habits. Add the article 'a' before 'bike' and 'child', and separate the self-introduction from the answer. Suggestion: state your name separately, then answer the question using past simple for past situations and correct articles.

× Yes, uh, yes, our bike is very popular in my country, uh, because of so many, so many.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them.

The phrase 'our bike is very popular' incorrectly uses 'our' and singular 'bike' to speak about a general situation; plural 'bikes' is appropriate (ID 1 and 22). 'Because of so many, so many' is unclear and ungrammatical (sentence structure issue). Use 'many people use them' to express the reason clearly and grammatically. Also remove filler words 'uh' in a corrected written response.

× So many people's are used by because of, uh, so many people are preferred to.

✓ Many people use bicycles because they are convenient and affordable, so they prefer them.

This original text has several errors: 'people's are used by' is incorrect word order and an incorrect possessive; 'are used by' misplaces subject and object (ID 27 and 26). 'Are preferred to' is incomplete and ungrammatical—'prefer' is an active verb taking a direct object (ID 16). The corrected sentence uses proper subject-verb agreement ('people use bicycles') and a clear reason and preference structure ('they prefer them').