自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more accurate, coherent and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid grammar mistakes (tense, articles, pronouns) and unclear phrases. Keep answers to no more than five sentences.

範例: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a pink bike for my sixth birthday, and I rode it to school and around the neighborhood. Because it was light and easy to handle, I learned to balance quickly and felt very proud whenever I could ride without training wheels.

建議: Answer directly and organize points with linking words. Use clearer vocabulary (e.g., "shared bikes" not "share bike stations"), correct grammar and give a specific reason or example. Limit to 2–4 sentences and avoid unclear phrases like "emergency without back on them side."

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in China. For example, shared-bike services are everywhere, so people can quickly rent a bike when they need to travel a short distance. This convenience makes cycling a common and practical choice for daily commutes.

× I remember it's on my 6 year old birthday that my parents bought me as a gift.

✓ I remember it was on my sixth birthday that my parents bought me a bike as a gift.

The sentence refers to a past event so use past tense 'it was' instead of 'it's'. Also '6 year old' should be 'sixth' (correct ordinal form) and add the noun 'bike' which was implied. Use consistent past tense for clarity.

× Uh, I remember it's a pink 1 and I usually write it go after school and uh, I wanted to have price to my.

✓ I remember it was a pink one and I usually rode it home after school, and I wanted to have pride in it.

Use 'one' for a noun placeholder rather than '1'. 'Write it go' is incorrect; context likely meant 'rode it home' (past habitual action) so use 'rode' or 'usually rode'. 'Wanted to have price to my' is ungrammatical; likely 'pride in it' is intended. Maintain past tense 'was' and 'rode'.

× Yeah, definitely. It's really popular in China, especially on the street.

✓ Yeah, definitely. They're really popular in China, especially on the streets.

Talking about bikes in general requires plural pronoun 'they' not 'it'. Use present simple 'are' contracted as 'they're'. Also 'on the street' should be pluralized to 'on the streets' when referring generally.

× I can see a lot of share bike stations nearby and it's for people who are emergency without back on them side.

✓ I can see a lot of shared bike stations nearby and they're for people in an emergency who don't have a bike with them.

Use 'shared bike stations' (adjective 'shared') and plural 'they're'. 'People who are emergency' is incorrect; use 'people in an emergency'. 'Without back on them side' is garbled; meaning 'don't have a bike with them' fits. Correct quantifier/word choice and pronouns.

× So it's super convenient and popular in my country.

✓ So they're super convenient and popular in my country.

Refers back to 'shared bikes' (plural), so use 'they're' instead of 'it's'. Ensure pronoun agrees in number with the noun it replaces.