自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答太简短，缺乏细节和连贯性。可以先直接回答，然后用一两句具体细节扩展（例如什么时候开始，有没有特别的回忆，或父母是否支持），并使用连接词使表述更自然。注意控制在不超过5句内，语言要自然流畅。

範例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about seven, and I used to ride it to the park with my older brother every weekend. It helped me feel independent and I remember practicing until I could ride without training wheels.

建議: 回答有观点但不够具体且语法和用词有问题（“everyone may”不自然）。应先给出明确观点，然后用一到两句具体理由或例子支持，并用连接词衔接。可以说明在哪些城市更常见、通勤和环保等原因。保持语言自然，句子不超过5句。

範例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in many cities, especially among students and office workers. They are a cheap and convenient way to avoid traffic, and in recent years bike-sharing schemes have made them even more common.

× Sure, everyone may ride bike to work and study.

✓ Sure, everyone can ride a bike to work and to study.

问题类型：情态动词/词语搭配与冠词使用。原句中使用 may 表示“可能/被允许”，与说话者想表达的一般能力或普遍情况不符；此外，“ride bike”缺少冠词，应为“ride a bike”，并且“and study”前添加“to”使结构平行更自然。建议：当表达一般能力或普遍事实时，用 can；注意可数名词单数前需要不定冠词 a/an；并保持并列不定式（to ride ... and to study）或使用对称结构（ride a bike to work and to study / ride a bike to go to work and to study）。