自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Bạn đã hiểu sai câu hỏi và phát âm/diễn đạt không chính xác. Cần trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề ngắn, rồi thêm 1–2 câu chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: tuổi khi có xe, ai tặng, tần suất sử dụng). Tránh lặp lại câu hỏi và sửa ngữ pháp: dùng thì quá khứ đơn cho trải nghiệm trong quá khứ. Sử dụng từ nối nếu cần mở rộng.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was about seven. My parents bought it for me as a birthday present, and I rode it to school almost every day. Because of that, I became more independent and confident on the road.

建議: Bạn đã thay đổi từ khóa (bike → pie) và làm câu trả lời thành câu hỏi không phù hợp. Cần trả lời trực tiếp với ý kiến rõ ràng, sau đó giải thích với lý do cụ thể (ví dụ: giao thông, thể thao, môi trường, cơ sở hạ tầng). Dùng các từ nối để liên kết ý (for example, because, therefore).

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. For example, many people use bicycles for short commutes because traffic is heavy and it is cheaper than driving. As a result, local governments are building more bike lanes to encourage cycling.

× Did you have a bike when you were achieved?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student used 'achieved' which is incorrect in this context; 'achieved' is a past participle of 'achieve' and does not mean 'child'. The question asks about childhood, so the correct noun is 'child'. Suggestion: use 'child' to refer to the period of being young. Also ensure the past simple 'Did you have' remains unchanged to match the examiner's question.

× Do you think pies are popular in the countries?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

The student misused 'pies' and 'the countries'. 'Pies' is a different noun (food) and context requires 'bikes'. 'The countries' is incorrect because the question asks about the student's country (singular); use 'your country'. Suggestion: match the noun and use correct singular possessive 'your country' for location being asked about.