自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is direct and clear but repeats the examiner's question and is slightly redundant. To improve, begin with a concise topic sentence, avoid repeating the question, and add one or two brief supporting details (reason or a short example). Use a linking word if you add support (e.g., "because" or "so"). Keep it to no more than four sentences.

範例: No, I didn't have a bike as a child. I mainly walked to school because my family lived close by, and my parents preferred saving money for other things. As a result, I only rode a bicycle occasionally at friends' houses.

建議: Good direct response with a reason, but correct grammar (subject-verb agreement) and slightly more specific supporting details would improve your score. Use a linking word (you used "because" correctly) and add one concrete example or brief comparison (e.g., commuting, cost, environment). Keep sentences concise and avoid minor errors.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because distances between places are short and cycling is inexpensive. For example, many people commute to work or the market by bicycle, and there are dedicated bike lanes in several towns.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child? Actually, no, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The student's reply repeats the examiner's question and includes correct past-tense negative 'didn't have'. The repetition is unnecessary. Keep a concise past-tense response: 'I didn't have a bike when I was a child.' Suggestion: avoid repeating the question and answer directly in past tense. Note: This entry identifies a redundancy rather than a tense error; no change to verb form is needed.

× Yeah, I think bikes are very popular in our country because our country is very small, so most of the people uses bikes for their transportation.

✓ Yeah, I think bikes are very popular in our country because our country is very small, so most people use bikes for their transportation.

The phrase 'most of the people uses' has a subject-verb agreement error and an unnecessary definite article. With 'most people' the subject is plural, so the verb should be 'use' (not 'uses'). Also omit 'of the' when speaking generally: say 'most people' rather than 'most of the people'. Additionally, 'their transportation' is acceptable but can be simplified to 'transport' or 'getting around.' Suggestion: use 'most people use' to match plural subject with plural verb and keep the sentence concise.