自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cevap daha doğru dilbilgisi ve akıcı zaman kullanımıyla geliştirilmeli. Tek cümlede tekrarlardan kaçının, doğru zaman (past simple) kullanın ve kısa destekleyici detay ekleyin. Örneğin: ana fikri net söyleyin, sonra ne sıklıkta sürdüğünüzü ve kimlerle veya nerede sürdüğünüzü belirtin. Ayrıca 3–4 cümleyi geçmeyin.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I rode it once or twice a week, usually around my neighborhood with my friends. I used it to go to the park and sometimes for short errands, which made me feel independent.

建議: Cümle yapısı, kelime seçimi ve anlatım netliği üzerinde çalışılmalı. "People love" ve "do sports" gibi doğru ifadeler kullanılmalı; ayrıca neden popüler olduklarını belirtin (sağlık, tasarruf, çevre vb.). Gereksiz veya alakasız ifadeler (ör. "People laughs") çıkarılmalı. Bağlaçlarla mantıklı destekleyici gerekçe verin ve 3 cümleyi aşmayın.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for exercise and short trips. In addition, cycling is affordable and good for the environment, so more people choose bikes instead of cars. As a result, you can often see bike lanes and groups of cyclists in cities.

× Yes, when I was a child I have a bike and when I was a child I ride a bike once or twice a week.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I had a bike, and I rode it once or twice a week.

The student mixes past and present tenses. The situation refers to the past ('when I was a child'), so verbs should be in the past tense: 'have' -> 'had' and 'ride' -> 'rode'. Also pronoun/reference clarity: 'a bike' becomes 'it' in the second clause to avoid repetition. Suggestion: maintain consistent past tense for actions that occurred in the past.

× Yes I think bikes are popular in my country because in my country people loves do a sports like ride a cycle.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because people love doing sports like cycling.

There is a subject-verb agreement error: 'people' is plural, so the verb should be 'love' not 'loves'. Additionally, the verb phrase 'do a sports' is ungrammatical: use the gerund 'doing sports' or the noun 'sports', and 'ride a cycle' is awkward; 'cycling' is correct. Suggestion: match plural subjects with plural verb forms and use gerunds for activities (doing sports, cycling).

× People laughs.

✓ People laugh.

'People' is plural, so the verb should be base form 'laugh' (present simple) not 'laughs'. Also consider whether 'laugh' is the right verb for the intended meaning: if you mean 'they enjoy it' you could say 'people enjoy it' or 'people like it'. Suggestion: ensure plural subjects take plural verb forms and choose verbs that match intended meaning.