自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but too short and contains a hesitation/repetition. Give a clear topic sentence and a brief supporting detail (where or how you used the bike) using one or two linking words. Keep it natural and avoid repeating words.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought me when I was seven, and I rode it to visit friends in the neighbourhood. Because the streets were quiet, I felt confident learning to cycle quickly.

建議: The answer is unclear and contains many grammar and word-choice errors. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your opinion, then give two specific reasons using linking words (for example, because / therefore / however). Use correct vocabulary (e.g., "popular," "students," "bikes") and avoid phrases like "their own bias" which are vague here. Keep to 2–4 sentences max.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are fairly popular in my country. For example, many students use bicycles because schools are close to home and public transport can be expensive. However, biking is less common in large cities where traffic and long distances make cycling difficult.

× Yes, I I did.

✓ Yes, I did.

The sentence contains a repeated word 'I' causing a duplication error and awkward sentence structure. Remove the extra 'I' to form a correct short answer 'Yes, I did.' This keeps subject-verb order appropriate for a past tense short response.

× Yes, they do, I think, but it's us popular in my country because almost students there in my country, uh, they have their own bias and because the distance from the their school.

✓ Yes, I think so, but bicycles are not very popular in my country because most students there have their own bikes and the distance to their school is short.

Multiple errors appear: 'they do' is an incorrect short answer for a general statement (use 'I think so' or 'Yes, they are'); 'it's us popular' is ungrammatical — should be 'not very popular' (article and adjective usage); 'almost students' should be 'most students' (quantifier); 'bias' is a wrong word for 'bikes'; 'the distance from the their school' has article and preposition errors — correct is 'the distance to their school is short' or 'because schools are close'. Suggestions: use correct quantifiers ('most'), correct noun ('bikes'), ensure subject-verb agreement ('bicycles are'), fix articles ('the') and prepositions ('to their school'), and simplify the sentence: 'I think bicycles are not very popular in my country because most students have their own bikes and the distance to school is short.'