自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical and vocabulary errors. Aim to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, one or two supporting details, and correct verb forms. Keep it concise (no more than five sentences). Use simple past tense for past facts and avoid unrelated words. For example, say you had a bike, describe who gave it to you or how you used it, and optionally mention whether you would like to ride one in the future using a linking word (e.g., "also" or "in the future").

範例: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. My parents bought it for me on my seventh birthday, and I used it to ride to the park with my friends almost every day. Also, I hope to ride a motorbike in the future when I am older and have more experience.

建議: This answer is understandable but needs clearer language and better grammar. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give two specific supporting details with linking words (e.g., "for example", "because"). Correct article and plural usage ("most students", not "most of students"). Replace unclear terms like "ICE" with the intended word (probably "bikes").

範例: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country. For example, most students in primary and high school ride bikes to school because it is cheap and convenient. In addition, many families own at least one bicycle for short-distance travel.

× Yes, I definitely had a bath when I was child because I have to I have to blast it while to write off a bite when I a child. For the future I will drive a motorbike.

✓ Yes, I definitely had a bike when I was a child because I used to ride it to school. In the future I will ride a motorbike.

This original response has multiple issues: incorrect word choice ('bath' instead of 'bike'), missing article ('a child' -> 'a child'), tense and structure problems ('I have to I have to blast it while to write off a bite' is ungrammatical), and awkward future phrasing. The main grammar problem type is sentence structure errors because the sentence is not coherent and contains several mixed problems. Corrections made: replaced 'bath' with 'bike' for correct word choice, added the article 'a' before 'child', simplified to 'I used to ride it to school' to express habitual past action (correct past tense and clear meaning), and changed 'For the future I will drive a motorbike' to 'In the future I will ride a motorbike' because we use 'ride' for bikes and motorbikes. Suggestion: keep one clear clause per idea, use correct vocabulary (bike/ride), use 'used to' for past habitual actions, and 'in the future' or 'I will' for future intentions. Note: Although multiple specific error types apply (word choice, article, tense), the primary category requested is sentence structure errors (ID 26).

× Yes, I think ICE is as very popular in my country because most of students who study in primary school or high school, they usually go to school by a bike.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because most students in primary and high school usually go to school by bike.

Errors include incorrect noun 'ICE' (likely meant 'bikes'), unnecessary 'as', incorrect quantifier phrase 'most of students' (should be 'most students'), redundant pronoun 'they' after the relative clause, and incorrect article 'a bike' when speaking generally ('by bike'). The main grammar problem type selected is incorrect use of pronouns (ID 12) because the sentence incorrectly repeats the subject with 'they' and misuses 'who' clause. Corrections: replace 'ICE' with 'bikes', remove 'as', change 'most of students who study in primary school or high school, they' to 'most students in primary and high school', and use 'by bike' for general means of transport. Suggestion: avoid repeating subjects in relative clauses, use 'most students' not 'most of students', and use 'by bike' when speaking generally.