自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and not directly responsive. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid irrelevant phrasing like “I heard” and keep sentences concise (maximum 5). Use linking words if you add details.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a red bicycle that I rode almost every day after school, which helped me learn balance and confidence. Because I practiced regularly, I became comfortable cycling long distances with friends.

建議: Your answer has hesitation, repetition and vague wording. Give a direct answer, then support it with two clear, specific reasons using linking words (e.g., “because,” “for example,” “so”). Use accurate vocabulary (e.g., “petrol” or “fuel”) and avoid filler sounds. Keep it to 2–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because fuel prices are high and many people want a cheaper way to travel. For example, commuters often use bicycles for short trips, and cycling lanes in some cities have encouraged more people to ride.

× Yes, I heard it was the best experience I have today.

✓ Yes, I had what I think was the best experience of my life.

The student used 'heard' and 'have today' which mix past and present incorrectly. The question asks about childhood possession, so the response should use past tense. 'Heard' is incorrect contextually; use 'had' to indicate a past experience. Also 'the best experience I have today' is unnatural; 'the best experience of my life' or 'what I think was the best experience' fits better. Suggestion: use consistent past tense for past experiences and use natural collocations like 'had the best experience' or 'it was the best experience of my life.'

× Yes, I think so because uh, we are saving a golden oil, gas oil, I'm sorry, uh and uh, all of us are trying to uh, uh, ride the bike and all of us are uh, preferred to ride the bike.

✓ Yes, I think so because we are trying to save oil and gas, and many of us prefer to ride bikes.

Multiple issues: unclear nouns and pronoun use. 'we are saving a golden oil, gas oil' is ungrammatical—use 'we are trying to save oil and gas' to express conserving fuel. 'All of us are trying to ride the bike' is awkward; use 'many of us prefer to ride bikes' for general habit. 'Are preferred to ride' is incorrect passive/pronoun construction; 'prefer' is the correct active verb. Suggestion: use clear pronouns (we/many of us) and the active verb 'prefer', keep plural noun 'bikes' when speaking generally.